| Reviews for As the World Turns |
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ShivaVixen chapter 1 . 12/12/2018 Noticed the authors note, hope you’re okay |
sparklybutterfly42 chapter 8 . 12/1/2018 Rereading this story for the millionth time. I have to admit this chapter is probably my favorite. When Alfred turns feli and Ludwig into thirsty puddles of repressed lust I just die. This boy doesn’t even know what he’s doing. Thanks for writing this story. Though I’d absolutely love to see it finished (along with your other works. Nobody writes romerica like you do) I’m grateful that you leave them up so I can reread them whenever I want. |
DGG chapter 8 . 10/2/2016 Please update please please please please please please please! |
Leaffeather chapter 9 . 1/21/2016 Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please PLEASE UPDATE THIS. It's so amazing! |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/12/2015 THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL MY HEART IS SHATTERED BUT THIS OUTCOME WAS INEVITABLE I KNEW THE STORY WAS INCOMPLETE WHEN I OPENED IT BUT I CANNOT STOP MY TEARS |
It's-effing-fusha chapter 3 . 5/5/2015 So I kinda love Theresa. Like, a lot. You seem to have worked hard on developing her character and it shows. Nicley done. |
mylifedependsoncandy chapter 1 . 9/9/2014 ...Is it weird I said everything from the 'day time television show' (wanna call it novela so badly) in Spanish? Hehehe...my mom and my sisters watch waaaay to much Mi Corazon Es Tuyo, and re runs of Betty La Fea, so I now how all this works. ;P THE PRICE OF WATCHING TELEMUNDO AND TELEVISA WITH MY MOM! |
GenderBender25 chapter 2 . 5/27/2014 Oh my God, i loved the horse rant! An equestrian devote myself, i started imagining the genes and physical attributes and how many ways i could trace his pedigree to find the perfect match. I love purepreads but dometimes crosses need to happen. I could train a Andalusian X Missouri Fox Trotter to give so many wonderful and beautiful gaits... *sigh* The woes of horse fanattics. |
kittyee chapter 9 . 5/7/2014 Wow... I just read this in an entire evening because I couldn't put it down! I'm as addicted to this as the others are to Forever is Not Long Enough! Hope there is more to come! Thanks for the amazing read. I wish the soap opera was real because I really want to see it! |
neverchange5986 chapter 9 . 3/15/2014 I need more QAQ |
neutralpigeons chapter 9 . 2/1/2014 this is AMAZING! i love how u portray america. in most fictions hes kind of ditzy and annoying:( but now hes capable of so much more and the other countries are starting to see it. pls dont give up on this story its would be such a waste! update soon(in fact u dont have to update soon just continue:D!) |
sparklybutterfly42 chapter 9 . 1/15/2014 this story is absolutely fantastic! i wish you would update. you aren't giving up on this, right? cuz it's awesome and deserves to b finished. |
sparklybutterfly42 chapter 4 . 1/15/2014 is the character with the ripped shirts that he talks about jim kirk from star trek? cuz that dude's whirt is ALWAYS ripped. |
ShotgunSymphony chapter 9 . 11/26/2013 This has to be the fourth time I've read this fanfiction to satisfy my need for more. It is such a wonderfully written and executed story for such a difficult, intricately creative plot! It is so unlike any other fanfiction I have read in the Hetalia fandom, and it certainly set a new standard for me in the fanfictions I read. I could go over so many things I find so delicious about this story and how you've written it, so I will just cover the major ones. The characters here, in my opinion, are excellently portrayed. I adore how you give us (the readers) a glimpse of other cultures and how it affects the countries's actions, not to mention how with the overly-eccentric and fictionalized personalities that appear in the show you've toned it back just such to make them more believable. I also quite enjoy Theresa. Other fanfictions I've read that have open spots for characters tend to just utilize a canon character, and that usually leads to OOC in order to fit in the role. However, here, you've chosen to use a non-canonical character and you've executed Theresa perfectly. She has depth, and a tangible personality that even though she is not always the nicest person (quite egotistical at times) one cannot help but enjoy every scene with her in them. Thirdly, the execution of the writing. So much storyline is contained in each chapter you write yet it does not seem rushed, or packed, and always has a sublime natural flow to it that I sometimes forget that I'm reading a story about fictional characters and believe this is a movie playing in my mind, or rather, a day-time drama in itself! Every time I think I know what will happen you drop yet another tidbit here and there about the contents of future chapters or expand the story and create another plot device and it leaves my mouth watering for more. With all of this said there is even more to talk about- the plot itself. Now, I realize this plot was not an original idea but submitted as a request I believe? Regardless, it's your writing that makes this story come to life and without it such a deliciously interesting story would crumble to incoherent sand. You haven't updated since... well, over a year ago. Now, I imagine there are reasons for this and don't feel like I am pressuring you to continue, but I just want you to know that there are adoring fans waiting behind the screen to taste another of your beautiful chapters! Because with this story, reading it Forever is Not Long Enough! |
NykiTyki chapter 4 . 8/10/2013 I mean gosh, this story is very well written and a very interesting read! I really love it. Everything is so clear and you make the characters so awesome. Perfect xD |