| Reviews for Son of the Underworld |
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MMShaneA2020 chapter 1 . 7/25 I would probably end up eating a whole pack of ambrosia and drinking a whole canteen of nectar. So far so good! Rlly enjoying it |
The Master 19 chapter 1 . 6/30 Can I adopt your story? I will give all credit to you. Son of the underworld 2 will be under the name The Master 10, The Master 19 or The Sci fy guy. Many Thanks |
Nargelz chapter 6 . 5/9 I mean Nico wasn’t completely accepted but people were still nice to him |
Nargelz chapter 2 . 5/9 Please tell me that he at least connects to nico and Bianca! |
The-owl-wolf-the-viper-demon chapter 12 . 5/3 ...I have seen and sensed demons and angles and spirits too I have visited the spirit world i am part native American I believe that i have the soul of a wolf but the body of a human because my body feels wrong like i am the wrong being the wrong creature the wrong species i am attuned to animals and prefer animals then humans |
Apollyon-JP chapter 1 . 4/7 The story is definitely wrong; Hades sent Alecto because he suspected that Percy was a child of the sea. If he sired the child, then he would've felt his aura be similar to his, and not the sea's. Also, this story already has great grammatical errors. It's as if a child wrote this. Also, children of Hades would've stayed away from anyone, even if they helped them. They would've grudgingly thanked them and then leave, not to talk to them again. A great example would be Nico; his sister was the main cause for his personality change, and Percy, without his kind mother, would've been bitter as well. Speaking of Percy's mother, he would've had BLACK eyes, even if his mother had green, because demigods inherit their parent's eyes, hair, and a portion of their personalities. Sally would've gave him the personality she has by teaching him, like to never disrespect women or take listen to of another's opinion. Overall, the story is already terrible, but I'm going to rewrite this... with your permission. If you don't respond in thirty days at least, then I'll take it as a no, and I'd just rewrite it for my own person reading... Sorry if this sounds rude, but it gets on my nerve when there's obvious grammar mistakes. |
garden galaxy chapter 1 . 3/6 percy as hades son is a new take |
Entropy the Eternal Destroyer chapter 16 . 1/27 Where is "Son of the Underworld 2"? |
Jasongraceforeve chapter 3 . 1/24 This is amazing! |
twinsouls chapter 1 . 1/13 me and all my damn friends would overdose on ambrosia then annoy the piss out of pops untill we can leave again -signed fellow demigod roxas son of hades |
Apollyon-JP chapter 4 . 12/13/2019 1) Hercules/Heracles is a bitch 2) Alecto would've never been at Yancy Academy, they only follow orders of the god of the Dead, and Hades would know if Perseus was his son, and Alecto would've never attacked, instead taking care of him from the beginning. |
DreamyKitty25 chapter 16 . 7/18/2019 Hi! I love your story! Do you have an idea of when Son og the Underworld 2 comes out? Anyway, thanks for this amazing story and plot3 |
thunderofdeath97 chapter 16 . 7/14/2019 percy is pathetic |
Wika0304 chapter 16 . 7/9/2019 please update, it's great |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/3/2019 Please update, I love it |