hey this is a nice story.. its like a series.. do continue on.. may if it gets long enough you can send this to the zoids people and ask them to turn it into a sequal of zoids zero... it'll be a good one... wif romance for da first time... no wait second time... no wait third lol... AniwAiz... do update.. i love it!.. man i sound like a chiq.. who cares its mad... cyaz!

Great story. I challenge you to write more (Please?)

First of all, I thank you for your review on the first chapter of my Card Captors story Yuuki-Chan. (I am not used to calling you that, but it's cool.) And second of all, to tell you how great I think this story is. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great job more please

This story is awesome! It is also a unique idea. You did a great job of keeping the charcters in charcter, escpically Jamie when he transforms into the Wild Eagle. I can't wait to read the rest! Also please R & R my Zoids fic: An Ally In Backdraft

~Damion Axces~

That was a great chapter, write more soon, it's really interseting.

Well written i cant wait for more