Please write a sequel

I really loved reading this story. It's one of the best officer fics in the fandom and at that, very believable. Olivia wasn't much likeable in the beginning of the story but midway through the fic, I was on her side. Holly and James were so cute together and I really liked how you wrote them. Also, I liked how you didn't give James a nickname or address him as simply "Moody". Some authors do Jim or Jimmy but I like how you used his first name... stays true to who he was, you know? Please consider writing another officer fic. You're very good! You've got a fan here for sure!

You should write another officer-centric Titanic story, either about Moody or Lowe. This story is one of the better officer fics in the fandom, so I'd be interested in seeing what else you could come up with. Please consider.

I'm really liking this story so far!

Great chapter . What if someone from the party admitted that he loved Olivia May ? What would happen to her then , and her arranged marriage? Just a thought for you to work with. Otherwise I really am liking the new Olivia better than the way she was in earlier chapters. Please update again soon.

I can't wait to find out what is going to happen with Olivia and her maid holly. I'm looking forward to your future posts for this story.

Please continue! I really want to know what happens to James and Holly, and if Olivia marries Henry. Harry and Olivia seem like a good match, Keep writing this story is amazing! :)

Are you going to pair Olivia with Harry? It seems like you've been hinting it ;)

This is honestly an amazing story, update soon please and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

That awkward moment when you know that the astors were arboard from Cherbourg.. Hahaha so far so good, I quite like this one, well done!
-MOC-

In response to your comment about not liking this chapter maybe it's the authenticity of it?

1) No woman of that era would hand out the kisses on the cheeks...that probably be looked as prostitution almos, and most def improper.

2) Officer Lowe, nor anyone of his rank or above, would tell a passenger to call them by their first name.

3) Time is skipping around too much. Like Holly and Moody are mtg for lunch, but next thing you know they're watching the sunset.

4) Oliva would never admit to Tommy being in her bedroom, he could be arrested for that; plus they may b in love but he's still 3rd class and she is a proper1st class lady

In response to your comment about not liking this chapter maybe it's the authenticity of it?

1) No woman of that era would hand out the kisses on the cheeks...that probably be looked as prostitution almos, and most def improper.

2) Officer Lowe, nor anyone of his rank or above, would tell a passenger to call them by their first name.

3) Time is skipping around too much. Like Holly and Moody are mtg for lunch, but next thing you know they're watching the sunset.

4) Oliva would never admit to Tommy being in her bedroom, he could be arrested for that; plus they may b in love but he's still 3rd class and she is a proper1st class lady

Dear Mr Haim,

I hope someone kicks you in the mouth with their steel toed boots! What are you...some kind of monster? Oh, that's right, you are a monster!

Dear 'Punk' author,

I'm really NOT a violent person, but you have really gotten me emotionally attached/invested! (This is good. I feel as if I'm a passenger living in your story!)

Awwwww! I got goosebumps, some slight butterfly flutters in my tummy, and a few tears in my eyes! So nice to see Olivia "grow up" in the last few chapters.

Only complaint: the word 'smirk' is the story almost as often as the word 'and.'

Yay Tommy for the verbal "slap" you gave Olivia last chapter!

Props Olivia for allowing some positivity into your life by shutting up and listening with your heart for once!

I'm loving the Moody-Holly love story happening! I think every time one of them blushes and smiles I blush and snile along with them!