Ah, yes Marceline - you go girl!
Defeating the Vampire King and protects the Bubblegum Princess...all in a days work!

THIS WAS SO GOOD. MORE PLEASE

I LOVED THIS. HOW COULD YOU NOT CONTINUE?! IT'S WONDERFUL. Please know that if you ever want to do a sequel I'll be waiting to read it and keep falling in love

Brilliant story. Dark in parts, light in others, very much like the show it's based off of :)
I especially liked the little bit about Peppermint Butler knowing how to get blood stains out of the carpet XDD
All in all a very good fic :)

Fzzzzzz. So awesome. Oh God. Your fics are the best.

Why you not continuing!
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It's a nice little story . Loved it

Ah, man, that was amazing. I wanna say I wanted it to be longer, but I don't see how you could work extending past this part.

Nicely done. Loved it.

Uh! That was so good. Can't wait to see what happens in the next one!

Nice story. )

That was probably the most epic ending to a fanfic ever. Just saying.

I love this whole thing. You get all the best ideas.

Awww poor dear Marceline! This was too amazing. I had my doubts but it was better than I expected it to be :) Great story! on to read more! _

Awwwww cutest thing ever! o Would have loved it if it was cute 5 year old Bubblegum and Marceline but this is just too dang adorable :'D I might have gotten diabetes _

This story was very suspenseful! :)
The idea presented to me by not Marceline loving Princess Bubblegum out of romance, but loving her as a family member/friend had me loving the story right from the begining.:)
The detail given of the merciless vampire king ripping the old couple to pieces had me shaking of fear for the poor baby Bubblegum's life.
Seeing the relationship between Marceline and her king had me feeling all the more sympethetic for Marceline when she realized she was betrayed by him.
Good work! :)