| Reviews for Hell in Heels |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2018 She didn't have to keep up and she could of taken them of or i dont know trusted deeks to do his fucking job for once. Fucking bitch thats all she is |
mylove24 chapter 1 . 10/27/2013 Loved it. Love the little moments between kensi ans callen. Deeks learned his lesson. |
Stephanie chapter 1 . 6/18/2012 Hey, vampyre nights! Thank you, thank you and THANK YOU for this story. It was ridiculously hilarious and I just really loved it. I don't have anything bad to say about your writing, no criticism, sorry! I just hope you write a few more of these! :) P.S. Are you shipping Callen and Kensi a little bit? The touching seemed veeeery friendly, but maybe that's just me. Write more! |
JuDDi chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 Uou! That is very nice! Hahajajjajahaha I laughed a lot imagin Deek's face hahajah |
AshLiz chapter 1 . 12/26/2011 Hahahahaha omg that was the best! I loved it! It is sooo hard to walk in heels I had to walk in 5 inch heels with a sprained ankle I was miserable but I had to do it bc I was presenting awards lol nice job |
xxlisaxx chapter 1 . 11/10/2011 This is really good, and very funny! Good Job! |
unbrokensaviorwithperfecthair chapter 1 . 11/9/2011 This is an interesting idea. Just as a suggestion, when writing characters' thoughts down, make sure there's space between the words. As long as they're in italics, people will know they're thoughts. Other than that, this got a few laughs out of me. Personally, I wouldn't make it into a full story. This seemed more like a one-shot, but do what you like. |