Prime is such an idiot. More stupid than Megatron? Not really. More stupid than Knockout? Very much so.

Wow! This was so well written! You portrayed the dialogues so well and it was so great to meet Skyfire in the Prime verse - he seems like a sweety!
Excellent work!

I really love the storyline, it was amazing. Your take on the characters was perfect in ny opinion. I find Starscream to be the most complicated character, but you have portrayed him like he deserveres

Great story. I admire you and this story! I wish to be able to write stories like these- I will strive to learn from your example :) thank you

What a fabulous story. You've captured their characters perfectly which not many authors do so well. This would translate into the tv show perfectly.

Wonderfully wrought. I could have sworn I reviewed this when I originally read it, as I loved it to bits... Your portrayal of Starscream is absolutely captivating and wonderfully done; he becomes a sympathetic character without losing any of the sinister plotting, snide comments, and egotistical monologues (It's a nice treat of the medium that we even get internal ones) which made me love his TFP characterization. You've avoided having him degrade as a villain with marvelous aplomb.

But to my main reason for returning, as I would never have even known that my review didn't get through if I didn't have a question to ask. What sort of reaction do you think Starscream will have to recent events in part two of "Operation: Bumblebee" ? I realize that an idea is either appealing as something to write about, or it isn't - and that you have made no requests for, well, requests. _; Feel free to ignore me... But I would be highly interested in your take on things.

Love! :D

THIS. You have captured Starscream's voice so perfectly. I utterly adored this fic. The banter. The snark. The use of Ratchet and Breakdown. Thanks for writing such a great fic!

-Dracoqueen22

Ratchet and Starscream are the best snarky dynamic duo ever. Seriously.

Thanks for the great read!

Brilliant story! Loved it. Your depiction of Starscream was great - you can capture so much in just a few sentences or throwaway remarks, like this one: "He knew their general positioning having had his main lines crimped more than once under Megatron's unforgiving grasp." Just sneaked in there, very surreptitiously, and it tells us so much about him.

I really enjoyed the last couple of chapters, where Starscream is just giving it everything he has to save Skyfire - the bit where he refuses to give up on the transfusion is soooo heartbreaking. Well done for finishing too!

I hope you write more soon!

I like it!

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Damn, just too good to end it there. Please, please, PLEASE! With a cherry on top? Pretty, pretty please?

BEST portrayal of Starscream ever! So wonderfully written, and the wit of the dialog had me laughing off my chair. I don't think you need me to tell you that you should take up a profession in writing because the world is missing something without this story. I love how Ratchet interacts with everyone and the situation is totally plausible. God I am so praying that this story doesn't end soon because I am just having way to much fun.

"My body is an imbecile."

*lols forever* Trust Starscream to throw insults at his own physical form for getting slagged! Ahhh, I enjoyed reading this story so much.

I can't help but feel that it ended just when things were getting interesting. It almost feels more like a prologue.

Staying tuned for more of your stories!

3! Your Starscream is just so wonderful in this. Word and thought so VERY much his arrogant, manipulative, selfish, and yet very, very smart self. I found myself rooting for him, as his motives were selfish but pure, and Skyfire...well, Skyfire seemed like he understands him. Maybe might not like everything that Starscream has become, but understands him. I don't know that he and Skyfire are going to work out in this 'verse any better than they do in G1, but still...I have to be happy for what little happiness they might have. :D