I'm sorry, but I've never read anything like this before, and I'm not saying it in a good way. I'm very disappointed with this fanfiction. I thought that despite being bad blood, he would not go to these extremes with a woman, or that at least the plot would be minimally interesting ... I thought that he would change (my god...) and she would be strong and vital. But it has not been that way. I do not understand how someone can write this type of story with this type of plot and that people like it. a story in which chapter after chapter the only thing you can read is about a man systematically raping and physically and verbally mistreating a woman, all the time. It is boring but above all horrible. I had a feeling of helplessness and frustration seeing that nothing was going anywhere and that all I read was rapes and more rapes. I don't understand rape being written as a good thing that ends in love in the future. people who mistreat do not change. and making her like to have sex with him despite the abuse is disgusting. horrible. If you wanted to have written a story based on role and domination, you should have done it, and you would have done it correctly, and not so. a total waste of time.

I enjoy your stories how ever i am getting tired of the rape, wish you have it a different twist made the basterd less evil and show a better side to the girl .

Ummmm, just putting it out there that yautja DON T have nipples, this has confused the entire so,sorry,justsaying .

yo lo quiero,!

Ooooooh boy

There was so much action! And that little snake girl seems pretty cool. I like all the Yautja verbiage you throw in :)

Wowowow he has such a temper!

Amazing. What a lovely lemon c:

Wow, you really don’t sugar coat the violence! You’ve really thought this through, well done. It’s so gruesome how rough he is with her. It makes for a convincing story.

Oooo a cliffie! Their interaction is on point. I like that he’s not overly sensitive and caring right now, it feels ooc when writers do that right at the beginning

This is a really interesting read!

Wow, an appropriately brutal opening for a predator fic! I’m interested to see where this goes :)

Para cuando la continuación?

Amber should make up her mind. First, she’s turned on then she hates him... then turned on, then hates him. It’s the same thing over and over again which is getting tiring. I mean, I love the smut but other than that... meh. For an oc though I like Syra because he’s actually in character of what a yautja should be but Amber? Idk what her character/personality is supposed to be and is, overall, not a very likeable character.

Continuala por favor esta genial!