Skulker

Pretty good so far.

An interesting story. Although I was expecting an emergency trip to the Far Frozen. Oh well, Looking forward to more!

Great story!

I thought Jazz was a Junior. I'm pretty sure she once said something along the lines of, "I know college is a year away, but you can never be too sure." while she was talking about which college to attend.

Short chapters, but it's decent so far.

Jack's out of character by a bit. He's too perceptive, and there isn't any of the goofy element to his character. Even if the subject is serious, there should have been at least some of that in him.

Nice...

I think...you're evil. And an amazing writer.

Hm...Skulker's definitely going to be in for it.

Ohoho. I'm loving where this plot's turning.

The suspense and action in this is awesome.

This is incredibly good. You overlaid the perspectives just enough that it had new and fresh events, and it wasn't tedious at all. Great work, there.

Ooh. This is wonderfully set up already. Your style is especially neat.

Did he die? He died, didn't he? I bet he died. Isn't that sooooo happy?! *note the sracasm* I really like this, but some reactions aren't natural.

I like it, but I am so confused right now. Just... What? I'll keep on reading.