awesome story! nice Polivia stuff! :)

And yet another good one - you really, really write good smut.

I loved this, loved visualizing it:

He opened the door to find her looking down, hands in the pockets of her coat. Her hair was loose, shining beautifully around her shoulders under the faint porch light. She was wearing pajama pants and ugg boots. He had mixed feelings of concern and endearment as she looked awfully cute standing there dressed like that, but still, he wondered what had made her leave her place in such a rush. Then she looked up, shyly at him, her cheeks pink, smiling that secretive smile of hers, and she surpassed all his expectations, mixing his concern and endearment into sweet confusion. (I could just imagine that 'sweet confusion' look on his face as she looked up at him)

i'm very sorry that i have only just discovered you. like seriously you need to write more lol

so very glad you posted this, yummmmmmmm

cold shower time. or maybe I'll just go wake my husband up.

Love it. Smut w/out plot is always good. Not many typos! Perfect Polivia!

LOVE IT!

THIS WAS THE SCENE I WAS MISSING IN THE EPISODE!

I know you said don't review, but I'm going to anyway.

I LOVED IT! cute story, wonderful smut, well written despite English being your 2nd or 3rd language.

thank you for sharing this little nugget.

and don't we all write some delicious smut when we're sexually frustrated every once in a while? ;p

gostei imenso! se calhar teria feito umas correcções na escrita ali no início, mas já nem sei quais porque não eram de todo relevantes. Gostei imenso da descrição! Adoro smut, e ultimamente ando super apaixonada por fringe :) quero ler a tua outra fic, aposto que também vou gostar.

É das cenas que mais gosto da série, aquela em que a Olivia acorda e acaricia o Peter, vestida com a camisa dele...tão fofos!

I loved this line:

It was so surreal that they were finally together that he very often found himself questioning reality, wondering if his perceptions were fooling him, if his dreams had become so real that he had started believing them or if his reality had become so surreal that he couldn't believe it anymore.

This one made me laugh:

"You do realize I have my gun in the car?" She mumbled

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I liked the tie in at the end to the conversation the morning of the beginning of that episode. Your English was fine, the only thing I noticed were what were probably typos and their weren't many of those.

Thanks for sharing.

Aaahh this is soooooo good! You should really write stuff like this more often, its amazing! Seriously, I was grinning like a fool. :')

When I read this there was no reviews, so here's one :)

I loved it. Writing a smut fic while frustrated like that, I know how you feel, but it always ends up with a good fic :)

Fuck Carla. I absolutely NEED to review. In all honesty, this is the best smut I have read in a while, and I am left all brainless and needing my own Peter (or Olivia, really). My hormones are wild and this is not helping lmao. But really. ASDFGHKKL. Totally love this, it was so sensual and soft and sexy and hoooot and AGDJKDKSK because he made her scream and I died. And then it was the beginning of 6:02AM and I died some more. Totally making this forever canon in my head because ASDFGHJKL.

Girl you need to write more. Seriously.