| Reviews for Teach Me How to Dance |
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Lollipopdiego chapter 1 . 11/12/2011 Hey girl, whatsup? *highfive* Key for YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB. Heh, when I first saw this I was like, "Whoa, are we going to learn how to dougie?" I know how to shuffle and reject and Spongebob, but I can't dougie. Leave it to the black guys hahahaha. (: Dancing is cool too. I married Elliot in IoH - which is kind of sad because I like Shea more and I don't want to re start - but Chelsea and Elliot are just so darn cute. You captures the personality well. It was really sweet and honest, and I absolutely adored this. Wonderful work! Although, you give me the impression that Vaughn wants to dance with Chelsea, but hen he actually does he doesn't want to anymore. Chels is a nice person, so she'll accept his dance request. But does Vaughn really want to dance with Chelsea? That part was a little unclear to me. It was still very entertaining, I got to say. I thought that Will and Chelsea dancing was hilarious! The ending was a satisfactory tie to it all. Again, well done. ~diego |
mindhoneyAddict chapter 1 . 11/9/2011 Whoops! Cute story, but you might want to check it over because there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, and several typos. o_o; |
Caramel Custard chapter 1 . 11/8/2011 Awwww- twas so cute! ;w; I really disliked Elliot at first, but I grew to like him over time. And while the idea of Pierre in a Yukata was cute, (Although I doubt he'd remove his hat.) I was having a hard time imagining HIM swinging NATALIE around. heh heh. Anyway, great story, and I look forward to reading more from you! |
swingdancer23 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011 Aw, this was so cute (: I love dance so much; it's rare to see a dance story on here, so I'm glad you wrote it! I really liked that you didn't frown upon any particular pairing. It's refreshing, really. The whole dang thing was just so cute; I loved it! I noticed a couple typos, but they weren't bad :) Great work! I'd love to see a Velsea done by you, if you're into them :D (Psst! That's a request! xD) |
Ava-Keep777 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011 *Leap of joy* I love Elliot&Chelsea pairings and especialy their stories. So yeah you definity have my vote on it being an awsome story. And it is it just flows so nicly it's like watching a good movie on a Saturday WITH NO HOMEWORK :). Keep it up. |
SunnieDoodles chapter 1 . 11/8/2011 This is absoulutly amazing! You are an fantastic writer! You've even spreaded out your pharagraphs! Thank you thank you! You are an awesome writer to boot! And I love the ending! Nice job! Make other harvest moon stories! ElliotXChelsea is my fave! Thank you! |