Reviews for Teach Me How to Dance
Lollipopdiego chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Hey girl, whatsup? *highfive*

Key for YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB.

Heh, when I first saw this I was like, "Whoa, are we going to learn how to dougie?" I know how to shuffle and reject and Spongebob, but I can't dougie. Leave it to the black guys hahahaha. (:

Dancing is cool too. I married Elliot in IoH - which is kind of sad because I like Shea more and I don't want to re start - but Chelsea and Elliot are just so darn cute. You captures the personality well. It was really sweet and honest, and I absolutely adored this. Wonderful work!

Although, you give me the impression that Vaughn wants to dance with Chelsea, but hen he actually does he doesn't want to anymore. Chels is a nice person, so she'll accept his dance request. But does Vaughn really want to dance with Chelsea? That part was a little unclear to me. It was still very entertaining, I got to say.

I thought that Will and Chelsea dancing was hilarious!

The ending was a satisfactory tie to it all. Again, well done.

~diego
mindhoneyAddict chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Whoops! Cute story, but you might want to check it over because there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, and several typos. o_o;
Caramel Custard chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Awwww- twas so cute! ;w;

I really disliked Elliot at first, but I grew to like him over time.

And while the idea of Pierre in a Yukata was cute, (Although I doubt he'd remove his hat.) I was having a hard time imagining HIM swinging NATALIE around. heh heh.

Anyway, great story, and I look forward to reading more from you!
swingdancer23 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Aw, this was so cute (: I love dance so much; it's rare to see a dance story on here, so I'm glad you wrote it!

I really liked that you didn't frown upon any particular pairing. It's refreshing, really. The whole dang thing was just so cute; I loved it!

I noticed a couple typos, but they weren't bad :)

Great work! I'd love to see a Velsea done by you, if you're into them :D (Psst! That's a request! xD)
Ava-Keep777 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
*Leap of joy* I love Elliot&Chelsea pairings and especialy their stories. So yeah you definity have my vote on it being an awsome story. And it is it just flows so nicly it's like watching a good movie on a Saturday WITH NO HOMEWORK :). Keep it up.
SunnieDoodles chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
This is absoulutly amazing! You are an fantastic writer! You've even spreaded out your pharagraphs! Thank you thank you! You are an awesome writer to boot!

And I love the ending! Nice job! Make other harvest moon stories! ElliotXChelsea is my fave! Thank you!