Wonderful short piece! Great writing and I love Stef and Vanyel. And you named her companion Sirius! Don't know if that was influenced by anything in particular, but I hapen to love that name because of Sirius Black.

funny sticks to the books and is romantic. cool.

Um, the silver in Vanyel's hair was not something he was born with, it was the result of magical bleaching, and Vanyel is well aware that adepts apear in his bloodline, the vrondi have nothing to do with what gifts you are born with, he would not expect them to keep it from happening. Vrondi simply watch those who use magic, and are the main players in the truth spell.

Kyah! I loved that! ::laughs:: That was absolutley vundarbarr, Chika! ::has nick-named you chika, because s/he can:: I'm off to attck your author page, so! ::salutes:: keep up the good work!

-J

grate story! I realy like it

Great story. I'd love to see it continued. Vanyel and Stef are always kawaii! Thank you again for you review on my story!

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haha. this is a very good story. good job.

Is that the end of the story or is there more? Because it would be good to see what happens to the little princess!

lol...are you going to continue this?

Cute and fun. Things the best stories are made of.

I like it...but she took that just a tad too well, didn't she? I know when I was 10 years old I was scared of ghosts...

This is a really great story and easy to read.