Oh my, this was so good! Can we have more angry Sherlock? Sherlock topping?! Please!

Wow that was good

OMG please continue to make angry sherlocks! I LOVE it! :3

Haha this was cute. I loved the bit with Sherlock' s sassy banter at the end :p

why does this not have a sequel with sherlock topping?

Ohh that was priceless! Please write more!

Oh

Jesus

Okay, reading more of your stuff was definitely a good idea. Your characterizations are top-notch. Asphyxiation, again, is something I've never seen done right. And here you go, coming up with another story which despite its shortness is blistering hot while staying realistic. (and hell, at the other reviewer; too dark for your taste? Seriously, there are warnings in the description. Asphyxiation doesn't exactly go in hand with sweet and cute and bubbly.)

But what really topped it off were the last few lines. Blew my mind. /This/ is what I want when someone writes D/s to the warnings. What almost never gets delivered. If you would ever write a ficlet for that kink… you'd go in my favourite authors list forever. Hell, I'd draw you stuff for that. Because then, the only thing that's missing would be consensual knife-play and you'd have covered every single of my favourite kinks. Holy. Fucking. Hell.

Never stop writing.

That was not what I expected from the title... too dark for my taste, Sherlock reminded me too much of Moriarty.

It'd be cool that not all the Sherlock/John stories are all fluffy and sweet, but...

I don't know. This one was...

I don't like Sherlock like this, but he could be like that. But John... I'm not sure John would ever put up with that Sherlock at all.

I want more angry Sherlock. I demand more. Pretty please with a cherry on top? :)