This really is a good story, please resume it. The tension between them, and the dialog are both excellent.

I noticed that it has certainly been a while since your last update, but I hope you'll read this. I love your story. It's very original and I love the realistic and dark theme it has. I also think that you've written the characters really well and there is no hint of OOCs in them. And because your story is more than great, I would really love, if you haven't forgotten about it and will continue writing some day again.

Oohhh I know where this is going!

Phobos wants Will to bear his heir!

I love this (I even loved the reference to the Tudors)! I know you may not be able to read this, but I really think that this is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read! And even though you probably wouldn’t, I do deeply wish that you would eventually make a part two or an epilogue to this story.

Hi this is an awesome story I really hope that you eventually finish this as I would love to know where you take this story.

I love this story! Are you going to continue it?

I hope that you will update one day! This story is fantastic and deserves to be finished!

This story is getting good I really hope you will have more chapters in the future soon. Keep up the good work man!

I hope you have not finished for that would be dreadful so please hurt with the next one.

I love will and Phobos pairing soo yeah

I ended up finding this story due to pure luck of browsing about and goodness what an addiction I have now. The whole feeling of the story, the sass of Phobos and Will being exchanged, the mystery of what Will is seeing, I need more! The date for it's last update makes me cringe a bit, I can only hope and worry that you'll update this story because I'm not sure how I'll live without reading the rest.

why oh why havnt you updated you little cow! why oh why! I wish for more chapters! and more will/phobos or however you spell his name cause I don't want to go back and look!

This story is very much intriguing. I do hope to witness a slow descent into love. Or maybe Will's slow descent to insanity. But overall, this is wonderfully woven. A few, very rare, grammatical confusions but still understandable. I do hope you update soon.

Good story!

Interesting story there . The characters were all IC and there are only a few typos. I also like your writing style ( would love to read the prequel too ) . All in all , the story is pretty compelling and I really like your portrayal of Phobos ( the dreams are a nice touch as well ). Hope you write more soon, I enjoyed it a lot . So great job . Keep it up !
lazyass out !