Reviews for Carousel
Darkness7913 chapter 11 . 11/16/2016
A fluffy G27! I often wonder where the other 1st gen are.. But then! This is keeping me on my toes and WHY! Does Tsu have to experience all those deaths! (I feel bad for him) hope he can master all his moves so that he'll be able to fight back! Don't steal the keys Mukuro!
Rellon chapter 11 . 11/17/2015
God, this fic is so amazing. So awesome. Goddamit. Really, I was binge-reading all the chapters, but, at the same time, ot held my attention in a way I have never seen in any other fic. I loved the way pairings, if you'd call them that, were subtle but realistic. Its not the way EVERYONE wants to eat Tsuna in the All27 fics. People actually get to know him, and are quite racional about their was masterfully conducted, nothing was our of place and not even out of character. This was a great red, and is totaly one of my top 10 fics ever read...
hustsu chapter 11 . 5/26/2015
I'm so awestrucked. Really don't know what to comment. Just want you to know I'm really impeessed with your writing and you have gained one more fan who faithfully wait for your update.
Constantly Oscitating chapter 11 . 2/24/2015
I for one adore the lovey-dovey brother duo. xD So very cute! And Hibari's awkward romancing gives me life.

Hmmmm, it's been a while since Yamamoto and Gokudera have made an appearance. I'm curious to see them enter the scene again. I wonder what Mukuro's next actions will be too. I know he said he wouldn't help Byakuran, but now that he knows almost everything, and he's, well, Mukuro, his actions seem a bit unpredictable. And Shoichi being a 'God' or king, or whatever makes me laugh. Reborn being one (assumingly), doesn't come as a surprise though. However, I still have no idea what his motivations are, so.

Thank you so much for writing this! This is by far one of the best fics I've read - it's so thrilling, and puzzling and innovative, and I have a million-and-one theories in my head on everything happening, and I simply can't wait until the next update! So lovely, thank you so much for recommending it to me. As always, you're a brilliant writer. :)
Constantly Oscitating chapter 9 . 2/24/2015
Yay! Hibari finally got over himself and asked to...um, 'court' Tsuna! Be it in his own, awkward and strangely formal way. xD The entire scene was very fitting.

Heck yes to that ending! I kind of want Tsuna to take out all his frustration on Reborn, because Reborn kind of deserves it. I also love when Tsuna surprises people with how great he is.
Constantly Oscitating chapter 5 . 2/23/2015
Poor Tsuna. Poor Gokudera and Yamamoto. Poor everybody. D:

That last scene was quite the plot twist; I didn't see it coming, though it makes so much sense. And of course Reborn would be the one to have remembered first. This is intense, so good!
Constantly Oscitating chapter 4 . 2/23/2015
PLOT THICKENS! It's so exciting! Fantastic chapter!

Murkuro is a creep...(but I love him anyway.) The entire middle scene with Reborn and Tsuna made me far too giddy (I may or may not be a not-so-secret R27 shipper as well, *cough*). Reborn is just the best. And the ending was adorable and actually hopeful for once!
Constantly Oscitating chapter 3 . 2/23/2015
This was a hilarious chapter - I loved it! xD Hibari being a typical school-yard bully and "stealing" Tsuna's lunch is the best thing ever! So cute!

You do an amazing job balancing the seriousness and humor of this fic! It's really great!
Constantly Oscitating chapter 2 . 2/23/2015
Sometimes (read: literally every minute of everyday) I just want to hug Tsuna. :( Poor Tsuna.
Constantly Oscitating chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
Oh, gosh - that first chapter was a rollercoaster of emotions! Ugh, how many times can I mention that I love your style of writing? I don't know what it is, but it just always manages to pull you in. Hibari's such a complex character to nail down, too, but you got it perfectly, and I'm not sure where the premise is going, but it's so interesting and mysterious that I can't help but read more...

Thank you for another intriguing fic! I love it!
HiKaRi55 chapter 11 . 2/2/2015
OMG OMG OMG, you're back and updating this amazing story! it's been a while since I read it and thought it will never update again, please continue this awesome story, love the way you write
Seisui Luminarywalker chapter 11 . 7/5/2014
Haah, it's been so long! Therefore I'm sorry if some things I say in this review will sound familiar to you. .*

Reading the first scene in this chapter was a good reminder about what this story is about: A world created among many worlds and all of these contained within a larger world - which means the lives of our protagonists are being controlled by someone IN the story, which they are trying to change. The three things that personally stood out to me in that scene were for one, that the first few sentences exchanged between Byakuran and Shoichi sound like you - the author - is talking to us readers, trying to apologize for the delay, given when the last chapter was updated. :3
The second was that after all there IS a God and the small comment right after the two passages explaining the mechanics of this AU story caught my attention. I could start a discussion about this but since this is supposed to be a review for this chapter, all I'll say is: "Yes, in a way it's selfish. But one of the basic desires of all living beings is 'to live' and therefore 'to exist'. So it's not like you could reprimand anyone for being selfish for something basic, maybe even simple, as that. Well, at least in theory."
As a last - and this piqued my curiousity - was that the 'kings' or 'workers' or whatever they shall be named are divided in black and white, which means that they serve different purposes and I wonder which. Seeing as this story is not your typical, cliché-riddled, romance-story but the opposite, the classic whitegood and blackevil (or maybe whitelife and blackdeath?) probably doesn't apply just like that, so I'm curious to find out what it'll be. (And of course Byakuran's and Reborn's roles in the grand scheme of things.)

Hm... what else...I really loved the large amount of introspection into the character's minds you gave us. With Hibari, you gave us more insight into his past (in this world) and further into his way of thinking. Plus for anyone who didn't notice his subtle character development in the last few chapters by this chapter it's been made loud and clear, what with contrasting child!Hibari to adult!Hibari and additionally with Tsuna. (And Hibari's attempt at flirting at the end of that sequence made me chuckle. :3)
That Tsuna went through character development is a wonderful sight too, especially since that enables him to finally tell Giotto how he's felt all these years and how he feels about him, triggering a revelation for Giotto as well, ending with their relationship improving (I won't say "mended" because things like these take a little more time than that and it'd be pretty unrealistic if all was well and forgotten just like that, instead of trust that has to be built up step by step again). The last scene is doubly heartwarming for me, since my older brother is all like "I'm a guy, I don't have feelings" so it's a refreshing read to me. .
Although on the topic of that scene - Giotto's outburst seemed to me as sudden and out-of-nowhere as for Tsuna and personally a little forced to me. I know that we've seen some of Giotto's thoughts on his younger brother in earlier chapters but since it's been so long, I'm not sure if there was a concrete build-up the last few chapters that would completely justify such a sudden reaction without any clear input (or at least I don't really see any clear input from "eating breakfast" that would trigger such a strong response from Giotto).

Last but not least, when I glanced at the genres of this story I had to wonder. I can see that some of the macabre comparisons you make during the "dream/static-sequences" would be fitting for the horror-genre, but somehow the plot doesn't feel like horror (certainly like "mind-blow" but not horror). Except if that is... subtle foreshadowing?

With that the review's done. ...I don't know what's been going on this past time but seeing as you are back and can still write about love without sounding cynical, it seems that you're doing well right now.
So, then! Stay happy and healthy, and keep it up!
-Luminarywalker
Klutzilla01 chapter 11 . 7/3/2014
[cries] You've updated! I'm seriously very happy right now; this has been one of my favorite fanfics for KHR in my life..! I'm in love with every word you end up tying and find myself addicted to each story you've done in the past. Thank you so much for updating!

Happy Birthday! And congratulations on reaching the end of your journey!
dreamwishstarx3 chapter 11 . 7/2/2014
wow! I'm so happy to see you back! All of your fanfics are mind-blowing and I don't even know what to say I'm just a really big fan ;u; happy belated birthday!
Anvaz chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
Thank you so so so so so so much, i scream like crazy when i read your update ** Thanks a lot!
Hope to read you soon with the continuation jeje but dont worry i will wait jeje
sorry for my bad english, i just want to say thanks and that im going to read you again when you continue -
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