Reviews for Darkness without Light?
MuddyDwarf chapter 22 . 5/16
Is this story dead?
Guest chapter 22 . 3/19
There is a pic of Ember Mclain as the winner standing on top of Desiree, Kitty, and Spectra. You could have Ember dream this and have reality subvert expectations.
Zero Arashi Uchiha chapter 19 . 8/21/2019
You know just from Seeing Dan Phantom’s daughter and Danny's daughter Sierra you should have added Victoria Phantom in this. I would have loved to see the look on Kitty and Johnny’s faces when Victoria says she's Kitty’s and Danny's daughter
Zero Arashi Uchiha chapter 1 . 7/31/2019
I like this fic
Guest chapter 20 . 7/30/2019
Desiree nearly endangered her child with that stunt. She better apologize .
Nazaru chapter 22 . 7/1/2019
Someone made a sequel to your thumbnail. Maybe you can have a dream sequence in the next chapter where Ember thinks she won the tournament and has Danny as her boyfriend. chillguydraws/art/Winner-Ember-McLain-Commission-618798327
Richard1081 chapter 2 . 6/23/2019
Please update
Nazaru chapter 9 . 2/12/2019
So the women get upset about Bertrand fighting to get Penelope back because it's like having a prize be won, yet most of these women are doing the same to Danny ? Glad to see feminism showing it's hypocrisy yet again . If only there was egalitarian to expose their bullshit .
Nazaru chapter 20 . 2/7/2019
If I were Danny Phantom , I'd say Desiree lost some significant points in becoming my wife and mother of my child by doing an ambush that nearly got Sierra hurt. Desiree should be made aware of this, and apologize. I also feel Danny should feel conflicted as being in a relationship with Desiree . He should feel like that something they should do of their own free will and let happen naturally . As oppose to doing because of timelines and fate.
Garisfrey26 chapter 22 . 11/14/2018
awesome story however im still hoping for danny x ember though im not sure how you would do it. sierra is a cutie and I hope that she will realize that ember is not the one she knows.
SkyMeliodas chapter 22 . 10/20/2018
Awesome
Guest chapter 22 . 12/24/2017
Keep up this story
Guest chapter 22 . 10/20/2017
Me again. I had another theory: what if Sierra was Desiree's biological(?) daughter, but the Ember of that timeline wished Sierra was her own offspring. Big twist: she still knows her real mother in spite of the changes.
Guest chapter 20 . 9/16/2017
I forgot to mention that I liked Desiree's, shall we say, pep talk. She's right: as both a king and a father, Danny has responsibilities and needs to know where to draw the line in intense situations. That's good in marriage; supporting and holding each other accountable.
On a side-note, I'm really enjoying Sam and Tucker as the announcers. You know what's weird? I've seen fanart of Sam in pink, and it actually seems to suit her.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/7/2017
I decided to check this out. It's not bad. I really like the concept.
I'm thinking Ember is Sierra's birth mother, but she betrayed Danny. Danny later re-married, hooking up with Desiree (apparently a far more stable relationship), which is why Sierra calls her mom. That's what I think, anyway.
Clever incentive to encourage Danny to not risk leaving. Now that many of his enemies and rivals are super-strong, somebody has to regulate travel between the two realms.
I have a question: how is Danny's fate secured in the event someone other than Danny or someone fighting for his freedom wins? Hypothetically, what's to stop him from just running or fighting? Would he be caged if the winner wanted him dead or imprisoned? Or if someone wanted a relationship of some capacity, like Desiree or Ember, would his mind be altered to fit their conditions? Or would it all just be kingly obligation (this last one feels like a stretch, considering Danny's a teen.)?
For some reason, if a female wins, I kind of want it to be Desiree. I like her plans: they sort of reflect her backstory, minus the jealous wife.
Also, considering this is a tournament, after all is said and done, perhaps you should think about alternate endings in which other characters won the tournament (like in Mortal Kombat or Injustice). How they got there wouldn't have to make sense, just that they won and what would come of it. Just a suggestion.
I look forward to the next chapter.
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