i love this fic so far

you know? since the topic of the fic is so... sensitive, It would be a good idea to put a warning at the begining saying whether there would be: rape, torture, humilliation, etc. Just so nobody is catched surprised

The fuck is wrong with you, you just want the world to burn down, don't you. YOU SICK BASTARD. Ohh and nice story really enjoyed it, that is up until the end. Now I don't know if I can stomach the second one.

I found your twist on the Harry Potter series to be quite interesting. Although on the darker side, it is pretty creative. I wished that you had explained more of the world you created though, like this new law. What exactly is it? I also don't understand Hermione's motivation to stay at Hogwarts. Does she get to become a witch once she graduates? I can't really tell since you never explicitly say. Regardless, this was a wonderful novel and I will definitely be reading the sequel!

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Just finished reading this story and can't wait for the sequel. Interesting story line.

amazing! truly amazing! I only found now the time to read this final chapter, and it's so exciting! I just hope that Hermione is gonna be fine one way or the other, and that she's gonna find her way back to Ron.

I'll surely read the new one!

Geez. What to do, what to do…This first part of the series was fantastic! I absolutely love it! What a way to end it! It just leaves me with so many questions…

•Why did Harry tell Ron not to help her?

•Why is Malfoy taking her away? Is she going to be his new slave?

•Does this have to do with the meeting at the Burrow?

•Is he going to get her back?

•How did the earrings come out? I thought only their Master could remove them?

Just…gah! I need you to post the first chapter of the sequel soon or I'll go absolutely mental! I just hope things work out well for Hermione. Well, I admire your writing and I can not wait for an update on the next part of the story!

Absolutely brilliant story ! I just finished it at one go .. Fantastic writing, superb characterizations, fascinating characters .. Please post the sequel asap .. I am waiting with bated breath .. R/Hr forever ..

That... that was spectacular... A momentum of agony and pain over the new-found loss and distress and doubt about the future. Frankly, not many words can really describe such scenes and feelings. Hermione is her true self, trying to protect those she cares about- Carla, in that case- even during a moment she's wholeheartedly afraid and almost broken herself. Her bond with Ron is shown in a very amazing way; both need to protect each other, but they also need to be cared by each other, so they can be well and sane themselves. Hermione really shows trust in Ron (even though I wonder if that will dramatically change after that eventual scene) and Ron feels nothing but debt to protect her from any harm apparent, and sorry for dragging her with him in any sort of danger throughout the year. The final moment between them, with Hermione's pleas and Ron's inability to act as he sincerely wished was simply breathtaking. As for the very last words, when the three discover Hermione's earrings abandoned, the ache of their is almost tangible, especially Ron's, in a very subtle, but yet powerful way, as for the first time- if correct enough, he lets himself to break down, in a way, to show how much the presence of Hermione affects his entire being...

In whole, this is a spectacular piece of fiction, one I'm very glad to 'discover'. I am confident that the continuation will be just as breathtaking and awesome- if not even more so- and will amazes all.

I hope you will be well and keep on your grand work. Thank you. :)

I look forward for the sequel!

thanks for the shot out

OMG what an ending. I can't believe that you had Malfoy take her. I can't believe that Harry and Ron let him take her. I thought they cared about her and would keep her safe. Why did they let Malfoy take her? Why does Malfoy want her? What will he do to her? Will Ron save her? Will Ron be able to get her back? I hope Malfoy does not have her raped or anything. Please don't let them rape her. Is it the end of the year? Will Hermione get to go home? What is the Order doing about this injustice? As you can see with this chapter you opened up alot of questions, I can't wait for the next installment to have these things answered.

*kisses*

Crystal

Intense and confusing ending. Can Malfoy just take her, or is it related to the meeting that took place in the Burrow at Christmas? Why did Harry stop Ron, unless it was a previous arrangement, or they want her to end up as a spy against Malfoy? The lack of earrings makes me wonder whether Malfoy has no control of her, or just symbolizes how she is no longer connected to Ron.

Well-written chapter to convey the pain Hermione was feeling and seeing it from all POVs.

Ahh...it's over! What a wicked way to end it too! Can't wait to read your next story! :)

Sandrinha, the story's been listed as "complete" since yesterday, just so you know.

Anyway, I wanted to thank you for mentioning me in your top reviewers, I forgot to read the Author's note yesterday so I just found out today. It's been a pleasure for me, and I'll be a faithful reviewer for as long as you're gonna write this series :)