| Reviews for Darkness in the Sun |
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   Inspired.Butterfly chapter 4 . 3/14/2019 Okay two critiques-she shouldn't use the word "die" so easily when it's basically a reality for her. Second, shouldn't she have no hair if she was getting treatment/chemo up until like a few days ago? Does she wear a wig? I would love this story if you actually went into the vulnerability of life as a cancer patient. So Caroline has Jimmy Choos...? The cheapest pair is like $600 for pumps. She's like what, 18? And how did they get to be so close if she is older than the rest of her best friends..? Sorry for all the critiques, but I'm just wondering about how realistic this is, even though it's set in "The Vampire Diaries". This is where I have to stop reading, sorry. |
| Inspired.Butterfly chapter 3 . 3/14/2019 First off, her parents sound horrible, and I'm not sure how I feel about it. Also, she "forgot" her car was at the hotel..? Um, who does that? |
| Inspired.Butterfly chapter 2 . 3/14/2019 While I find it HIGHLY unlikely that Elena would have her HUMAN friend live in a house with VAMPIRE brothers, I'll continue to read on. |
| Kushka chapter 32 . 1/3/2018 Good story |
| Kushka chapter 32 . 5/3/2017 Great story |
| Kushka chapter 32 . 2/16/2017 Great story |
| Lydia chapter 32 . 10/24/2016 Really good some mistakes here and there |
| K.Daniels chapter 26 . 6/27/2016 DX DX DX DX DX DX DX |
| sloksingh45 chapter 31 . 6/17/2016 i like this chapters |
| sloksingh45 chapter 30 . 6/17/2016 This was an awesome story |
| sloksingh45 chapter 29 . 6/17/2016 like it |
| sloksingh45 chapter 28 . 6/17/2016 love it |
| sloksingh45 chapter 27 . 6/17/2016 I like this |
| sloksingh45 chapter 26 . 6/17/2016 Good letter |
| sloksingh45 chapter 25 . 6/17/2016 loved this |
