oh my god, and i thought it was heart wrenching before.

Yes. Continue. :) or at least do the scene which mustang kills envy again with a twist or something... This is a good idea .

Nice bit of royai at the end and I wish in a way that this had happened in the actual series even though I probably would have died from the amount of emotion, hell I died from the amount of emotion just now XD

that is sooo sad! Poor Maes... and Gracia... and sweet little Elicia! RIP:(

Go Roy!

...all I can say is that I'm really, really glad this is not canon because I don't think my heart could take it. Too tragic for words!

Nuu D: He escapes the phoe booth only to be killed in his home... Nice twist :D

Wow I'm really shocked that no ones reviewd this yet O_O

This was beautifully writen and sooooo sad. Why do bad things always happen to Hughes? :(