Is this a oneshot, or will you be continuing it? I love stories about failsafe. It's such an intense episode. :/

I know you posted this a year ago. But wow, you did an oustanding job of portraying Wally and his thoughts. If you are still up for it, I would love for you to write more WallyXArtemis stories. Good jo.
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Yes you should continue. Good job.

U should so do more Spitfire fanfiction. Maybe throw in Robin too!

U should expand it! It's good

I like it. I think a reference to Homefront and maybe Bereft might have improved it. I like how you didn't write the confrontation and chose Wally for the pov.

Please make a sequel

Wally we are cheering you! Go on boy! I know you can do it! ;D

YEah... I pretty much think he's gonna talk to Artemis in the next episode! *-* I can't wait any more! I have to see it, but I still got four days to that... Ç_Ç

Soo Sad! Hunf... ;

Well.. I think your fic was great! Really. Beautiful, sad, moving... Ç/Ç Wally is cute and if Artemis don't get him, I will! /õ/

Really Great Job!

XOXO

I would like to see a follow-up to this, to see what goes on when he steps into the gym. One thing I noticed is that you were quite repetitive in this fanfic. But I loved the thoughts going through his head, and how Wally those thoughts were.

Whoa! Hey! I wanna see what happens! And that was perfect Wally-ness! I loved it!

i think that you captured wallys character perfectly. im pretty sure that those thoughts were going through his head. they were going throught my head after that episode! :) any ways i loved the story great job :)

you must do more for this was spectacular and i cant wait for more

AHHHHHH UPDATE! must no what happens!

Wow that was awesome! I love Wally/Arty also Failsafe was just epic in the angst sort of way.

Great job! I enjoyed it. And as for trying to write more Wally/Artemis fan fiction, yes. Yes, you should. Because I know it would be awesome like this. :D