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Thank you for updating so fast! This chapter was amazing! Can't wait to read more ;)

This is really good! I love the fluff and the whole plot! Can't wait to read more! I sense some drama coming along ;)

LOVE IT!

Sweet ending - I do love a happy ending! :)

I'm so happy for Ginny! :)

were (past tense of 'be')/where (e.g. 'where to go')/we're (we are)

I forgot to mention, Ginny wouldn't be nervous about her NEWTS, since those are the seventh year tests. She was probably studying for her OWLS, the fifth year tests.

"How comes your not sat with us?" [How come you're not sitting with us?]

I do no [I do know]

you was moody [were]

It's getting very exciting now...can't wait for Ginny to find out the truth about Harry's feelings! :)

Please don't be offended, but you need a beta. There are some excellent examples of very poor grammar in this chapter.

Oh, poor Ginny! I'm guessing Harry was confessing love for someone other than Cho...'hope I'm right! :) Please check your spelling - homophones (itspossessive/it'sit is, witch/which, etc.), and 'bean' is a food; 'been' is the correct word for the meaning intended.

Cute story idea, but there are some issues with spelling, grammar, etc. Btw, 'must of' should be 'must have'.

Great story!

I've seen LOADS worse, trust me... But, now for some hopefully constructive criticism.

I notice you keep swithing time - one minute you're in the past tense, the next you're in the present tense. Also, for the 'been' you're using here, it's with a double 'e', not 'ea'.

Other than that, I love your story! The writing was flowing, Cho's reaction... Sadly never came, but I pictured it as TOTALLY HILARIOUS due to the way you handled Ginny, and Ginny seemed perfectly in character. Hermione was being her usual, annoying, conniving self (why d'you think I think she's awesome? ME EVIL!)

Cho's reaction should be hilarious! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

this is great, but harry has green eyes, btw

Well I hope Harry breaks up with Cho before telling Ginny his feelings. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Awsome!... ;)

I like this story

Hope you update soon