Your story Lacks Context.. It is Simply Lust Fantasy.. No Real Plot. You can honestly do Better and i wish you luck.

Wow seriously. That was a waste of time, I mean it was good but seriously... When you start crap, you should actually finish it.

¿Qué cojones acabo de leer? ._.

I loved that story! I really don't know reaaaaally much about 'A Song of Ice and Fire', but I know the characters and I found it so cute!

you sick fuck. mpreg ... disgusting... arent you reviewer that read the story of ike raping mist.

Espero que Jon se quede con Robb

I have no words to describe how much i enjoyed reading this. Bravo!

I'm reading it, bravo! I love the story and it's plot. You're a gifted writer, if you made your own book with your own characters like this I'd buy the book in a heart beat!

u need jesus tbh

'Written to fill the void I found when I searched asoiaf mpreg.' that is like saying I found a beautiful pond of clear water and decided it really needed to be filled with shit.

Poor should really check on him. Oh Eddard if only you understood could've prevented a war.I really want to know who is the father of the baby.

Wow the crack in this story is is totally Theon's sal wife btw.

Pretty funny :P. Post moar.

This story makes me laugh so hard. I kinda hope Jon is pregnant so that Theon and Robb can continue fighting over them.

is something alright. Its definetly and Theon fighting over the baby is pretty funny. I'm curious though; who are the other gay Starks? Its a very interesting story please continue.