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I was hesitant to read this at first because I thought it would be depressing, but the ending was quite heart warming. I liked the interaction between Artemis and her mom. I really enjoyed this!

Hi

Nice little story.

The quality is good; good narration, interaction, dialog; emotion and drama

Your portrayal of Artemis was dynamic and in character; how though strong, determined and aggressive; she carries emotional wounds and sometimes they hurt a lot.

The basic plot involving the aftermath of the deadly robots, her personal fears about how she nearly lost her new family (her team), the memories of her broken one; and her talk with her mother over the phone was great one-shot.

The wholesome standards are high.

The language is clean.

Nothing is suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker

Aw! I loved this side of artemis!

This is really good, and so deserves more reviews! I loved the interaction between Artemis and her mum. Well done sir!

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This was a really enjoyable read. I loved the relationship between Artemis and her mom in this. Artemis is depicted in the series as a really caring person, but she tends to cover it with a snarky attitude, I can totally see Artemis relying on her mom for emotional support when things get overwhelming. Nicely done!

Well done! I enjoyed it. :D

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