I liked this story, not too many da stories where the protagonists have families. One thing I am not too crazy about however is Hawke becoming more draconic. Those parts and such were enough to make me feel queasy. Other than that, nice little story.

Well now im done Bethany and orsino is wrong

calima calima all over the place lol

I have read a loottt of MHawke/Merrill fanfiction (well, relatively, considering there isn't much), and this is by far my favorite. I love it so much :D And even the way you ended it was perfect. Just so much love for this.

This is a very good story and I would be interested in reading more

does this story have lemons?

Well...shit

When do the events of Inquisition occur? I like this story.

Damn...whelp I can no longer read this. Nothing against ya mind...just damn why her

Wait wasn't that sword dropped into the ocean? I'm quite sure diving tech doesn't exist that'd let people go miles underwater to find a sword.

Put something up i love this story its great please keep writing it and put in maybe lemon

Good to see this story going again. You really should try to introduce some new conflict into this thing, or at least some more persistent villains. Or make the Templars a more immediate threat.

I think this is a very good story I cant wait for you to update again and as to the game of thrones storys they both sound good but I think I like the first one better

Rouge is a color. Rogue is the term you're looking for. Just a little nitpick

It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.