Oh gosh, it is a surprise. And they will continue to haunt his nights, both brothers, and now the father.

A word of advice, it might help to label this as “Complete”.

Damn this was depressing... The plot twist the end was really ccool even though it just added more depression... (_;)

Love

Wow that ending was freaking...wow my...wow.

Ahh to deppresing! Other than that it was really good a gray story:) I'm really happy I could read yet another great story from you and so I say Frazier:)

Wish thc s took ie by surprise at first I was all like wth is going in? Then it all became clear and now I'm totally speechless:O

This is the first time I have cried at a fanfiction, EVER! That ending just chilled me to the core. It stunned me. I don't even know why, I don't cry easily, maybe because I expected a happy ending. Either way, this was beautiful, I love your style of writing.

Mind-blowing level: Hetaoni/puella magi

... so yeah. I ain't crying... it's raining, inside...
better keep the rain-drops from the computer.
Anyway Fatalistic story, and even knowing this, I enjoy it. Bittersweet taste in the mouth, and fate hates Feli, because, really, Justice Is No Victim. Human created justice, justice kills murderers, and they are too humans. We are all humans. Damn chapter 12 e.e
Anyway, Thank you for sharing such an interesting story.

thi story is so sad T_T i was crying by the end of this story because how bitter sweet it ended!

This story was absolutely heartbreaking.;A;

...But it was also insanely gorgeous.:3

Beautiful story!:D

There is something so amazingly wonderful about this story which is impossible to describe. It's cruel, it's ironic, and it's marvelously deep at the same time. I don't know how you do it, but you've managed to turn murderers into something more than most people would ever think they could be. It's very sad, but it's also very true. Ordinarily, people think that murderers are scum who deserve nothing better, but (and I think it's the fangirl in me speaking ) I can really feel for these guys, you know? Especially the part where Ivan broke down crying for Katyusha. My heart broke :'(

There are honestly so many good parts to this story! Like the part where Ivan broke down, the part where Ludwig was chasing Gilbert back to their foster mom's home. The best though, I think is the last part where Feli discovers that the grandchildren Germania was talking about were actually Gil and Ludwig and both were already dead.

Anyways, I'll stop rambling now and just... "

I'm going to be honest here. Since this story was not marked as complete, I had no idea it was finished. At the beginning I really thought you had something going that had amazing potential. Something that could have been a classic, but then came the last three chapters. And it was over? What happened? It really felt to me as if you lost interest or got bored. The relationship you were building between Ludwig and Feliciano was incredible at first but seemed to disappear in the end. I had no problems with you making this a tragedy and killing Ludwig, but I felt like there just should've been more. I don't know. Great start. Disappointing ending.

kinda confused here so did germany die or is this aftermath?

I-I love this story so much... I started tearing up when Germany died and Prussia was there for him...Also Feli's conversation with Germania was an extremely nice end... So sad... Bittersweet... Thank you so much for writing this...!

This is really amazing, not smutty of cliched like so many other fanfics. It's really sad though.