good story, cus its highly unlikely that it will be continued at this point to be honest ;p was a fun read though and I doubt you are even reading this ;p

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

Oh no what an ending to a chapter.

It's a shame you quit working on this story. It was just starting to get good.

Great story!

i hope this story isnt dead

Great Story! Plz Plz Update It Soon!

"Ranma eyed Ranma carefully. he thought." - and without even using a mirror!

Other than that, good fic. Nice to see Ranma not all-powerful and omniscient...

Mike

Minor nit: "strode forward and grabbed her hand, pumping it forcefully." This expresses the sentiment and the mood perfectly, but it's very un-Japanese. In real life, they would bow to each other to show respect.

Enough nits. I can tell that I'm in the hands of a skillful author. Your narrative draws me in and drags me along. It's nice to see character development done this well - too many Rama stories are "action'-oriented...

thanks,

Mike

So much for the hope of writing more often, eh? Still, it's a good story I'd like to see continued. An explanation of why Ranma can tell it's Ami, maybe a few more scenes about Ami and Makoto. I like the tone and pacing of the story. Your writing skills are good, and your plotting skills are engrossing. Please come back to us!

Good story.

Please continue it.

Not a bad start, for a reasonbly orginal Ranma/SM cross over. Sadly the fic did not really go any where before it was abonded though, after about 5 years there is little hope of this being continued. I rather liked the build up so far, Ranma being related to Ami. Of all the senshi, I've always thought they shared the most in common, both are brilliant in their chosen area's. Especialy Ranma's afinity to Cold with the Soul of Ice technique in normal cannon. Also seemed to set up some strange pairings, like a lesbian Makoto and Ami set up. They seemed to be blushing and fawning over each other, but hard to say with so little to go on. Over all this fic is just a decent start, that failed to go any where. Like so many other ranma cross overs.

In response to your Authors Notation. 'We can always hope'. Ciao

Hmm... I'd say four years of writers block beats six months... lol

Sorry, couldn't resist. Interesting story so far. Too bad you didn't continue it...

great story so far but why havent you been updating, plz dont tell me you gave up on the story, i wanna know whats gonna happen next *gives you the dreaded wide eyed puppy dog look* please continue the story _