I am so excited to see more of Elizabeth’s history! It’s so interesting to see what she had to deal with as a cursed creature compared to Thackery. I love it and the original twist you’ve pushed into this story. Can’t wait for more!

Oh, I'm so happy you're back! I missed this story, and I'm glad that you updated again. I enjoyed this chapter and cannot wait to read the next one :)

that was sweet! the medicine man came and helped her! great job on this chapter, definitely worth the wait!

Oh wow...

Where is chapter 16? It says its been updated but there is no new chapter. What gives?

Who is Joy?
Elizabeth's sister's name was Ruth...

so you really do update only around Halloween, just the one a year? that's incredible, equal parts fascinating and excruciating for having to wait a whole year. Too bad my internet is shoddy enough to not alert me of the update right away. I appreciate this interlude, we don't get to see the residual aftermath nearly enough for events that would be understandably traumatizing. so this was fun, and I will look forward to next year's update :)

nicely done! did you watch the 25th Anniversary Halloween Bash on Freeform network?!

I'm so glad you finally updated. I was starting to think it would be left unfinished like some stories. Can't wait for more.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon.

Loved this chapter. I liked getting a look at what Max and Alison are up to after everything. I hope we see more of that in the future and see what Danni is doing as well :)

Wow, you can think of my surprise and happy delight when I saw this updated! I actually went back and reread the whole story. This is nothing short of fantastic! I hope I don't have to wait until next Halloween to read more but if I must I must.. I am grateful that you've continued this fic! I was actually (no joke!) thinking of this story today and then all of the sudden there the update was just after coming home from work. Thank you! I look forward to reading more asap! Also, nice twist on this being Max writing a book. Everyone is so in character and I really enjoyed reading!
P.S. I reread this whilst watching said movie tis based on.. :) The ending of Hocus Pocus always gets to me..

Huh, didn't expect an update.

Hey, have you read the new Hocus Pocus sequel book?

please update this

I seriously love this story and your writing is amazing! I know it’s been two years since you updated, but I hope you continue!