Great story. I don't really get where they are going to go from here. They still have 2 different jobs and are an hour away from each other. I thought for sure while reading that Edward was going to leave his job because of his unhappiness but that doesn’t seem to be the case. Bella leaving hers didn’t sound likely since she seems very personally invested. So they’re still going to be living an hour away from each other in 3 weeks. Thank you for sharing.

Bella is a prude. Not saying she should have had sex with Edward but I didn't see any problem with them sharing the bed. She wouldn’t even take off her jeans and put on long underwear, seems a bit uptight to me. Was Edward even asking to sleep with her? He never said that, he just said he wanted to spend more time with her. Way to jump to conclusions. Am I wrong or don’t they live around the same area...? Either way, why are they acting like they will never see each other again? Alice was very inconsiderate, I can’t believe she would toss Bella out like she did. That was just so wrong. Were was jaspers room? Maybe he should have tossed one of his friends out if he shared. What would have happened if Edward didn’t walk her to the door? Was she suppose to sleep in the hallway? This chapter was just wrong all the way around.

What a great story! Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

What an adorable ending! Can I ask for more? Also skiing terrifies me so Bella’s initial issues are definitely the stuff of nightmares for me. Glad it works out so well for them!

Five stars!

You're just so clever! I love how effortless the dialogue seems. There's no clunkiness to your writing and your stories aren't so unbelievable that it makes them hard to read. You've mastered just the right amount of romance and sweetness without completely overdoing it. This is so much fun! And I obviously have too much time on my hands but I'm not complaining. It's also cool that you are a writer that still responds to reviews. That hasn't happened to me in a while, though admittedly, I'm not great at reviewing usually...

This chapter is chapter 21 of the story sleeping arrangements. I think it accidentally took the place of the real chapter 13

Oooooo sweet as sugar...
The last chapter of your stories are simply the best and not to mention the sweetest...!
Loved this story...

Hmmm the last para was just so sweet...:-)

He is such a great guy. Makes me want to hit the slopes. Just kidding...me and skiing don't go together.
I fractured my skull roller skating for God's sake! LOL. True story.

In tribute to your writing skill, I am systematically going through all your stories again. :)

What a sweet funny smexy story. Love your writing.

So i just read this the whole way through and loved it and thought "who's the author, this is good" and when I checked...of course it was you! It was sweet and sexy all at the same time! A breath of fresh air for my day! :) :)

I'm guessing he'll have to save her from James...

*Big sigh with a smile* Gotta tell you, that was one of the best lemons ever and the anticipation just added to it. The afterglow part, wonderful. So glad I went back to your profile to see if missed any and found this. I've done nothing that I was supposed to do today but oh well, I feel good and that's what matters. Thanks!