Wow

"I was seventeen," Hotch admitted. "But that's different. That was the eighties. Everyone was doing it."

This made me laugh so hard!

The dog knew. You always gotta trust the dog.

I think I'm more in love with Hotch through your fanfics! Ah I wish wish wish I had a dad like him he is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing! 3

Wow! this was awesome, absolutely loved this from the early humor to Hotch and Chorlotte at the end, amazing one shot, one of my favorites.

Wouldn't every girl want to have a dad like Hotch!

With four brothers and Mr protective there, I wouldn't put slashing of tires past them.

That was so cute! I loved the Hotch/Charlotte ending!

Tearjerker! Omg they are grown

Well there a saying little kids little problems, big kids bigger problems.

Amazing job

Wow. This is one of the best one-shots I have ever read. So well done and thoughtful. Its odd that its supposed to be so many years later, but all of the characters feel the same. Hotch and Emily were so good together here and I love the little details that were thrown in about everyone else. Also, I loved the story-line. Charlotte's relationship with her parents was so well done. This was a great one and I can't wait for more )

Loving this one shot! Seeing the way Hotch handles it all truly shows the kind of man he is and you wrote him beautifully. You have totally turned me into a Hotly shipper!

Although seeing Jack go and take care of the kid that hurt his little sister would be fun too...hehe

I love Hotch's bond with Charlie it reminds me of mind with my dad can't wait to see more.

Aww poor Charlie. But I love how Hotch can be so protective but still manage to make her feel safe. That just shows what a good father he is.

Ooh I do love Sean and Garcia. Always bring smiles to my face. Garcia with the whole being/possible of being conceived in Chevy. But Sean takes the trophy with

"You know that joke's never going to be funny,"

"Emily figured you'd only think I was joking. Can't say I didn't try to 'fess up'..."

I also want to kill Joe for first off getting what he wanted and then telling her that they probably wouldn't work out. Talk about douchebag. I want to kill him myself or at least have Morgan scare the sh*t out of him.

Aww cute.

Charlie's friends right, she does got it good. I know some parents would never have reacted so nicely.

But twas very cute.

Can Garcia get wind of this and enact twisted online revenge onto Joe? lol jk course that would mean Morgan would find out and he'd go find Rossi and the two of them would "take care of the situation" and I'm pretty sure Charlie doesn't want everyone to know.

Precious, and morbidly depressing at the same time... Don't even know how you did that. I'm almost mad that Hotch was right, just on principle, but especially mad that baby Charlie got hurt that way. :(

xx RavenclawGenius

I loved this; it had a great balance of humour and seriousness :) I love that Garcia is still her funky self even in her 50s and the characters are portrayed well even if they are getting older!

As much as I sound like an emotional freak, I did tear up and that's a sign that your writing is amazing.

Keep writing!

:)

I'm thinking between Hotch and Emily they could have figured out a way to make a statutory rape charge stick. Or at least threaten Joe with it . . .

Otherwise very nicely handled by them.

memo to HOtch...go hunt Joe down and beat the shit out of him...then turn Garcia on his sorry ass.