This was so sad. Chapter 6 was my favorite. I think I might make a profile to favorite this.

I’m breaking down know... you described Anakin’s and Obi-Wan’s relationship perfectly.
And Obi-Wan’s last moments and words... that was too much more me. You’re an awesome writer.

I was trying so hard not to cry, and this one got me. Now I’m sobbing. I’m so glad I’m not in school now. Anyway this story is beautiful. I’m going back to crying my eyes out now.

this one is too good. can you please write more, eve if obi wan died, like what happened afterward

i began to cry 33 amazing, just as obi-wan.

Sweet, sad story - *applause*

It's great story and awesome

Aw that was so sweet. I think that if Obi Wan could have choosen a life it would have been this one. I have to say that I love/hate that Luke couldn't be in the room. It was very moving and touches on that very human part of us that hopes that we can avoid pain by denying that it is happening (but I was still mentally yelling at him to get his butt back in the room thus the hate part). This has certainly made my top ten Star Wars AU head canon.

You killed him! Kept hoping for a last second cure.

Awww! Little Obi-Wan is just too adorable! _

I think that Obi-Wan calling Leia "Princess" in this is just the sweetest thing! ;-)

Awwww! Little Obi-Wan is just too cute!

I'm crying right now

I loved this! It was a really sad ending but all those flash backs! Priceless! Especially the mace windu ones. I loved that! Also you are not alone in your admiration and love for star wars footware. One day i will get my hands on some star wars boots and walk around in them proudly everywhere haha!
Anyways May the Force be with You!
little_china_girl22

Great story, I was crying from the beginning (but I'll deny it with my dying breath, lol). It was heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time. Damn, I promised myself I wouldn't cry but Obi Wan had to go and get himself killed while saving other's lives. Cute, a Jedi, selfless, strong, brave, gorgeous, funny, needs saving A LOT, but sometimes he's not too bright. But I can't stay mad at him. I loved all the flashbacks from all of the different character's perspectives. But I would have liked to see some from Qui Gon's POV and maybe even his force ghost in Obi Wan's room to help him on his way. Yeah, I know Qui Gon is dead but he's ghost did meet Luke and talked to Obi Wan to save Anakin (not to mention that he's my favourite Jedi. I think he needed more "screen" time). There was too many favourite flashbacks to pick just like the cookie theif, Qui Gon, the purple hair, Qui Gon, the chocolate cake, Qui Gon, the swimming lesson, Qui Gon. Wait I think I found my favourite flashback, yep it's Anakin talking about the nerfherder... ;) actually it's Qui Gon (but there are so many to choose from and if Leia were in the Qui Gon scene then it would have been hands done #1, as it is it just slightly beat out the rest but that's because of Qui Gon himself).

It was well written and I would enjoy seeing this story through Obi Wan's perspective and Qui Gon's ( you can't forget him. I mean he's tall, handsome, strong, great voice, a Jedi, gorgeous, cute, kind but not that bright either. He's everything Obi Wan is but it's Qui Gon;) ). I think there were a few grammatical mistakes but they didn't detract from the story. The one thing I didn't like was "Page Break" through out the chapters, it broke the flow of the story and made it choppy. maybe you should try dashes, crosses, wavy lines or some other symbol for page breaks. Thank you for your wonderful story.