Reviews for They Finally Meet!
Guest chapter 18 . 7/11
When is the next update?
Lilly-daughter of Radolso chapter 1 . 10/4/2019
umm... you spelled 'writing' wrong in the summary just so you know. You might want to fix that.
-LDR
Guest chapter 10 . 5/7/2019
phoenix is spelled wrong
Guest chapter 8 . 5/7/2019
you spelled Zeus wrong.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2019
I am kind of confused because at the beginning of the story you call it the blood of the Pharos, and that means lighthouse, which is different than pharaohs, as in the kings/ gods in mortal form. I am not trying to be a know it all, but I'm just confused about what you mean.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/25/2018
Please get a dictionary you can't spell but the book is amazing.I love what you did with Nico Sadie ,making Nico Like Anubis that was good
Guest chapter 4 . 12/23/2018
There are spelling mistakes on every page
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2018
The plot was really good and I really like the idea of it but its a little hard for me to read because its all in capitals and there are some spellings that are wrong.I'm not trying to insult it, it's a great story but I just think it would be helpful.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2018
I don't mean to insult or anything but I think if you could not do everything in capitals and also some of the spellings are wrong again not trying to insult just making suggestions
Thanks
Joe chapter 1 . 7/27/2017
Great love it
someone again chapter 4 . 1/29/2017
the note part, like addressed from the greek gods, is really cliched

er btw Osiris is not green, he is blue
someone chapter 1 . 1/29/2017
I think it is sorta when demigods introduce themselves as '(name), son/daughter of (god)'. they should only just ssay their names as they dunno who they are talking to, what if they're regular mortals? Demigods shouldn't really, like, say the name of their godly parent. it's like showing their identity and proving existence of gods they don't even know. And you're trying to not let mortals know that gods exist!
Lynncakequeen chapter 1 . 10/8/2016
things are mis spelled but i like it. needs more sadico
Guest chapter 18 . 6/24/2016
more chapters
Guest chapter 17 . 6/24/2016
you need to make more chapters
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