Really liked this too

Liked this very, very much. So complex and perceptive; it just feels so believable.

My favourite part:

'He liked it when Light mentioned that they were friends. He liked it very much.

And he hated himself, and he knew that he should not like any of these things; at some point, vigilance and deception had become obsession, and that obsession was dangerously close to addiction.'

-nods emphatically.

Brilliant charaterization! Would love to see Light's POV. Pretty please?

Poor L... not much time left for him in November to reason it out... he might be looking over the wall, but Light has built already a castle around himself. I really liked this story!

I love your writing and I really enjoyed this chapter. :3

...Holy crap that was good. You have an exceptionally amazing writing style. I absolutely love it. I'll certainly be looking out for moe of your work, without a doubt!

Beautiful!