This was so raw and emotional. Wow. Phenomenal job on this one. I wasn’t too crazy about Ron before, but you’ve fleshed out his character and motivations incredibly well. I didn’t even think about how he might be treated by his family and how his family might (ostensibly) prefer Harry over him.

Also, the way you wrote about Ron’s worsening illness couldn’t have been possible without experiencing something similar yourself. His disease really sounds like metastatic cancer. I really hope you or those close to you didn’t have to go anything like that. And if you did, I hope everything turned out well

Thank you :)

This must be my 4th or 5th time reading this fic. I love it so much.

The relationship between Ron and his family members is well done here, and it's an interesting idea.
But the overwhelming number of errors in the writing really detract from the story.
There are loads of cases of word confusion: for example appendage is confused with appendix throughout, their/there, patience/patients; some of the characters' names are spelled wrong; some of the sentences have missing words.
This all added up to a v frustrating read.

I swear Ginny really is my least favourite Weasley.

What right does Ginny have to be upset when Harry and Hermione have already forgiven them?!

I’m so tired of people treating Ron like shit. He deserves so much better!

This had me in tears! A child shouldn’t feel like they can’t talk to their parentsIf you can’t emotionally care for your child, why have them at all?

You know, I still adore this story, even after all this time. It's still one of my absolute favorite fics of all time. Like, I don't even come onto this website anymore, except to read this story specifically. I love the relationship between Ron, Harry, and Hermione so very much. Just the complete, overwhelming, and irrevocable love you portrayed here. I love the characters you've created in Rose, Antea, and Traux. The first time I read this, I was devastated when I got to the part about Abigail and Rose being a manifestation of Ron's memories. But as upsetting as it was, it was So Good. So beautifully written and the ending with the baby is so lovely. Honestly, not to sound sappy or dramatic, but you're writing is like poetry, it's so lovely and emotional. I know this review is years late, but just wanted you to know how much I love this story and how much I appreciate that you shared it with the world.

I gotta say, Ginny spying on Ron is the worst thing I've read today. It feels disgustingly intrusive. Please don't misunderstand, my ire is directed at Ginny; not you, not even for writing a chapter like this. I love this story very much but Ginny just makes me boil in this chapter. It's so hard for me to like her...

My second time reading this. Still love it. Just wish the spelling and grammar were better as that takes away from the story a little.

I love this fic and what you did with the characters. I will miss them.

Wow. this was far and away not a genre I normally read, but it was so worth it. what a wild, heart-wrenching ride.

You did have a lot of homonym/auto correct typos, but the overall writing and storyline were just too good to let that bother me. Like I said before, this is the best version/development of Ron that I have ever read.

this chapter made me bawl like a baby

God. I can't stand Ron-bashing fics, but ive never been a huge Ronald Weasley fan until this fic. this version of Ron I could see marrying Hermione and making her very happy. And that's high praise from me haha. I love how you have teased out and developed the family dynamics. I know someone who is the only boy in a family of girls, and I see a lot of his hurt in your Ron.

Wow wow wow! I think this is the most invested I’ve ever been in a FanFiction! Now I usually don’t read anything but romance on this site cause I’m a noob like that but I found this and I can’t tell you how many times I cried while reading this. You have such an amazing way with words and the way you captured Ron and his heartbreak and my goodness it was just beautiful. I love how your story flowed. Everything made sense, everything was meaningful. And I normally don’t get attached to OCs but I absolutely fell in love with Antea, Mary, and Rose/Abigail and when she died I think a part of me died with her lol. Ron is gonna be such a great father. You did an amazing job writing this! :)