wow thats deep damn good writing though

This is a really nice story. I liked the ending the best. Short, but sweet.

Please no!

I will not flame. . . . I am calm. Legolas is an elf. . . . this has been determined about thirteen times already, and as an elf, he should have some idea what kind of magic is being worked on him. You have not announced if it is dark magic or light magic. . . . and this makes him seem incompetent.

The Legolas I remember is anything but incompitent. . . .

Also, Legolas's dialogue is beginning to get on my nerves. Yes, he talked like that in Tolkien, but not only did all the characters talk like that in Tolkein, he used an epic style. This is not an epic style, and therefore the dialogue doesn't sound rightly out of place, it sounds WRONG.

It may be my opinion, but I don't like origional characters in fanfics, and this one just seems SO out of place. The one good thing I can say is that she hasn't been sucked into Middlearth, and there is SOME discription.

Great story! interesting... but could be alittle more detailed on the feelings between Legolas and Shalane... the conflicting feelings...etc. I like the way you describe the scenes though, and you really bring to life the 'bullies' and so on. Tugs-at-the-heartstrings kind of story... somewhat anyways. write more! I can't wait to read the next...

Hey, I'm the one from TORC you mailed. (: Really pretty story...simple and not Mary Sue-ish. Yayy!

Nice story, kind of sad tt they had to be separated though...i think he'd really behave like how u described if he come to a city. vry nice story. hanyu pinyin is right. should write more lurve stories...hehe

Oh Shufen, What should I say? I rarely do this...But then again..(Braahahaaa!) I often find myself challenged and stirred when I read your stories... But This Time..I GIVE UP! I'm throwing everything back, going to sit back and continue reading the rest! In all honesty, ( I'm not holding anything behind me)You're thumbs up!You create beautiful landscapes..your forte lies in using simple language to bring across your subtle passion.. It's smooth, rich and alive!

Anywhere else to improve? Legolas is complex and rich.. Shalene's character and dialogue can be improved to really bring out the story..

**GREAT!**

This was soo good! I cried at the end. It was really sweet and yet sad at the same time. I need to go and read a sappy happy story now before I start bawling now in happiness/sadness.

Great story though. You have an incredible knack for writting, never stop, you got a special gift! _

Catch ya later CAtz!

Waiiii. Cute. I wish that would happen to people in real life; that something wonderful could really happen.

Anie

Excellent story. I really liked the ending, it was quite beautiful. And the Chinese parts were cool too!

That was so beautiful! I cried! I loved this story so much!

*cries* Another beautiful piece. *resumes her crying*

I think I need a tissue, please excuse me...

That was different and I liked it. :)

thats great! Please keep writing

ai, Casey, it's beautiful! She's wonderfully un-Mary Sue-ish. I really like it!

Anie