A wonderful tag! I can just imagine it happening as if it really happened on the show! Carson's comment of wanting to go fishing adds both a dramatic and sad element to the fic, and John's thoughts of relating Rodney's comment of 'thawing out' and the stasis pod to frostbite in both the literal and figurative sense is brilliant. A well written tag!

That was really nice, I liked it

I cannot believe I am just getting to this. Okay, I can after all with the way my work schedule has been, but still. I think it interesting to get to this tonight, and have to resist the urge to frame the first two lines after the last two days. It's good to have him back, indeed. Yes. Carson. That's all I am talking about. I need a rewatch but desperately for some Atlantis, methinks. Especially since we shall miss our dear Scot this weekend. I quite enjoyed this story. Is it wrong I want the internal monologue of Carson getting what he said/ did to Rodney just then, later?

Beautifully done, thank you.

Very nice

What a fantastic story! I don't do much from a first person POV, but this was just wonderful.

I loved the dichotomy in it about the fishing trip and Carson not knowing why that caused such a reaction in Rodney. It's fascinated me recently to realize that clone!Carson has no knowledge of a good six months of Carson's life because of his time in Michael's custody. That was so illustrated here, and I love how you related it to frostbite.

Great work!

This is really sweet. Of course Carson/2.0 doesn't know about Rodney's guilt over the cancelled fishing trip; it's good Sheppard was there to cover Rodney's retreat, giving him time to work through his feelings. Nicely done.