| Reviews for To Change One Thing |
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The Good Child chapter 1 . 7/3 one of my absolute favorites |
KKVixen chapter 1 . 6/29 I’m CRYING OMG this was so sweet and cute and that ending was right out of a drama and I am in LOVE *squeals* This was utterly perfect and so well written~~ |
KarmaAkabaneKun707 chapter 1 . 6/4 I loved this! Soooo much! |
Tzarista chapter 1 . 5/2 aww the feels, this was so cute, I love your take on the anime. |
Stephanie MRV chapter 1 . 4/10 Awwwweeee Loved this |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6 This is so cute! I love the slow burn and the relationships between the ever independent Haruhi and the seniors. I’ve always low key cringed at how the other hosts were so condescending and controlling, so I really love how the seniors were shown to be conscientious and polite |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1 This is cuter every time I read it |
FromTheInsideOut2 chapter 1 . 2/28 Ah what a refreshing story! Steady friendship building into a budding relationship. This was cute. So cute. Just the fluff at the very end got me good. So good! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2019 the rewrite helped but the lying about the faves is still lying |
garueshlee chapter 1 . 8/14/2019 Out of all of the fanfictions I’ve ever read, this is and will always be my favorite work. |
Jcassie chapter 1 . 8/8/2019 OMG! THIS IS SERIOUSLY ADORABLE. WISH YOU'D DO A SEQUEL. OF HOW HARUHI FALLS IN LOVE. |
Kitteninthemoonlight chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 Wooooow...this was so different from the anime and yet I loved every change~ the comedy and “slice of life”-ness of this is really awesome |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2019 SO CUTE !‘nnnnnnm |
knightessjg chapter 1 . 6/25/2019 Very cute, and with much less drama |
WolfbrotherTitan chapter 1 . 4/30/2019 It’s been a long time since I last read this which is a bit of a shame because it really is quite excellent for a short story. Canon for Ouran High School Host Club required the breaking of the vase, and even though it really wasn’t her fault (or at least not totally her fault) it was necessary there to force Haruhi to join in the craziness that is the Host Club and it left in the me5hod you used here as a nice alternative. Also, I was never happy with the Tamaki pairing and Takashi never received much screen time and I liked the character whenever he interacted with Haruhi. Really, if I was going to complain about something it’d be a combination of how short the story is and the fact that Takashi’s declaration of love comes out of nowhere, and yeah, I know the story focused on Haruhi, thus meaning we didn’t see his feelings growing, but even that ‘problem’ really isn’t because we still saw little things here and there, and since we were seeing the story from Haruhi’s perspective there are some nice touches indicating that she’d probably already be in love if she’d let herself so there’s no fear for the future. On a note unrelated to this story, one of the things I liked in canon was when Haruhi impressed Kyouya’s father, that plus the scene when Kyouya was on the bed with her really made me want that pairing, then there was a few scene’s with the twins that made me think either of them might make a nice pairing for Haruhi (possibly both of them, just not sure how that would work), even Bossanova (can’t remember his actual name) might’ve been made to work, but the author put her with Tamaki...okay, maybe it works, but it was never the best option. |