ummm, i think it is a good story with a good twist at the end... never saw that coming, but, um, ya you might need some psychiatric help...lol XD

ok, so you killed everyone, and and you made my fav turtle a crazy robot-making phyco path, but man! this was good! one last thing: when donnie said: "lets go visit april" did he mean, just visit or kill her? if he ment kill her, please do so to casey. Bye!

That. Was. Sick.
And great :) Really nice xd

bitch...always gotta make up evil stories...

Well.
That was not what I expected.
Good on you for having the guts to do that.
But.
I darest say there is no hope from running from the fan girls.
If I were you I'd say your last good byes AND RUN LIKE HELLA CRAZY MAN!

Whoah! Don went psychotic! Great little fic. Thanks.

?! YOU TURNED MY FAVORITE TURTLE INTO A MURDERER! Well, a robot that LOOKS like him a murderer anyways. You killer Mikey and Leo ( not cool ) and turned Donnie into a cycopath! Yes, when you wrote this ( considering it was published in 1999 ) you obviously had the 1987 turtles in mind ( no remakes had been done yet ) but I know those turtles to. I am actually in the process of combing through the internet trying to find all the episodes. And they are not even remotely close to anything described here. This is about 10 times worse then what I've heard about SAINW! Where did you get this from?! especially with your other stories being funny and sorta silly.

Hello! How can you wrote a story like that? Are you a fan of horror movies? It was terrible what Donatello have done to his family! He needs to go to psychiatric ward immediately. You're so talented writer, but next time write another story with a different genre.

ooookay...

what the hell was that?

that's not even a likely AU

that's just...

wrong

it's written well and the characterizations are good, the action is portrayed well, I love what you've done with the drama and suspense

also it truly is horror but...

what the hell?

it's so twisted

that must be a real alternate anti-Donatello

but you shocked me, congrats

good story, horror story

(also: DIE for killing Leo and Mikey, Mikey was so innocent, he can't die and Leo's just... well Leo)

Oh, you sick twisted... why do people want Donnie to be a evil scientist... why? Oh, cruel...

pft.

Great fic. I really think Donnie might have been cooler with less psychosis involved but... yeah, the fic did well and I read it... and I'm running away now to the fic where I kill three out of four turtles slowly so umm, I'm such a hypocrit! But, yeah, heebies...

yep that was creepy and scary beyond reason! like

you completly killed my fave turtle i mean yeah Raph dies first of all the brothers whats up with you! and don would never do that

It's good! Shell If it I hadn't lost my emotions in a bet... I would have been scared. Sadly, I was forced to forgo my emotions and became dead inside...

Kidding, I'm a pirate tho...

And it is good. Please do continue.

Sweet, but this dark fic is just plainly evil, after all it's always the quiet ones. Well who cares about being a little bit sick? It's all for fun or tormented torture in the end.

Weird, sick, and all the descriptions that everyone else has used for it.
I don't know how I feel about this story, but I keep reading it...