Reviews for Brother's Keeper
Guest chapter 36 . 12/29/2019
Romance is nice and all, but you really ended on that note? Welp, it’s your story
Guest chapter 23 . 12/29/2019
I knew I didn’t like Annie from the beginning and here she is talking smack about people she barely knows.
Bookwyrm chapter 25 . 12/18/2017
I can't tell if they are being sarcastic about the helmet
GhostHornet chapter 8 . 2/14/2017
'Loki's Irish vampire housemate' out of context this a very strange sentence
Milly the Dragon chapter 36 . 10/6/2016
Mjolnir. Yes! I should have seen that coming. I hope that changes Loki's behaviour slightly in future, though I have doubts.
It's almost a pity, I think, that Loki doesn't remember watching the muppets. Amusing, though.
Twas a fun tale. I had to mask giggles at various points, proof that I shouldn't read on the train. Loki's little story in the final chapter for example.
You've probably heard this already, but I do not mind long chapters and am actually curious what you cut from the final one, if you recall after all this time. One small point though, there's a typo in the final chapter. Reads "They said of he and Mitchell were out saving the world..." I believe "of" should be "if".
Awesome story. I am glad there is another waiting for me, else I'd likely go mad with waiting myself.
sopmire chapter 36 . 10/10/2015
Such a delightful story, both in plotting and psychology!
babydragonXXX chapter 36 . 8/23/2015
Yaay! We finished it! And it has been much enjoyed by myself and my sister. I don't think I will ever be done reading about Loki interacting with children !
Comments from my sister:
Another great story it was amazing! I like the fact it was long and my favourite part was the horse jokes!
Considering how often I read this series I probably will eventually review every chapter of every story, but until then reviews will come at the end of each instalment until we have caught up.
Once again we both love this story. Thank you for writing it.
ShadowDragonPhoenix chapter 28 . 8/4/2015
Did I ever tell you how much I loved this chapter! Never mess with England, for she'll kick your ass if you do!

I get the Victory (the greatest ship ever to grace the Royal Navy), loved your representations of the Spitfires and Hurricanes, but I can't find any info on the doe-headed ship. Which one was that one?

Thanks
Whispers in the Void chapter 36 . 5/29/2015
That was a very satisfying end! And, yep, Loki totally wielded a still bound Mjolnir!

I just have to say, these stories are incredibly interesting to read, with much plot that is easy for readers to follow, and fun cameos and the like. Not to mention, stuff gets worked out fairly quickly, and basically, this is just one of the most awesome series ever.

(The Supernatural Avengers!)
Whispers in the Void chapter 35 . 5/29/2015
*sniffles*
Hope you are proud of the fact I cried all over my laptop for this chapter - the feels! This has got to be one of the more emotional chapters in all three parts of this story so far!
I'm glad Loki is finally starting to everything sorted out, and his family is figuring things out as well..
Whispers in the Void chapter 34 . 5/29/2015
*sniffles* Well, yeah, can't kill of the main character of a still running series, but that makes it no less painful!
I hope Loki doesn't get *too* mad about being brought back; hopefully, he'll find that the cleansed feeling comes with him...
Whispers in the Void chapter 33 . 5/29/2015
Oh my gosh!
The last thing I read before I had to turn off for the night was: Warning - Character Death.
I hold you responsible for the nightmares, all of which featured Loki dying in terrible ways. (kidding!)

Loki using Mjolnir! That made my day! Because, even without the enchantment, Mjolnir would not work for just anybody!

NO!
NO!
NO!
Resurrection aside, how could you do that?! It was horrible! It was terrible! It was feels!
(it was much braver than I would be, as I could write all the whump in the world but never actually kill him!)
Whispers in the Void chapter 32 . 5/29/2015
Battle! Honestly, I have nothing else to say, except, again, you are in fact rather good at keeping the story fairly cohesive and everyone woven together.
Whispers in the Void chapter 31 . 5/28/2015
My gods, this is far too entertaining...to your credit, I can totally see a fight like this actually happening in a movie! *applause*
Whispers in the Void chapter 30 . 5/28/2015
The sweetness at this end of this chapter was well appreciated and much loved - very good for Odin and Loki. And you just can't avoid getting starry eyes over the kids reaction to Loki!
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