You know, I can just... FEEL the desperation in this. I like this, very good job!

You like Dr. Horrible too? And you can write amazing Billy angst and what-if situations where he really did kill Captain Hammer? And you can write characteristic stream-of-consciousness and get the reader into the character's mind? I am officially your stalker. Well done. This site needs more Dr. Horrible fanfiction, even if it is usually depressing. XD

I was a little confused while reading it. It may have to do with the fact that I'm sick and half asleep right now or maybe you did that on purpose to show his confused state? I'm not sure. But still, good job! :)