| Reviews for The Challenger |
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writeallnight chapter 1 . 1/1 Obi-Wan sass. Qui-Gon sass. So different, and so well captured here. I cannot stop smiling. The idea that Qui-Gon dislikes this Jedi, and quite possibly sent Obi-Wan to Dex veeeeery purposefully is wonderful and delightful and amazing. I'm proud of Obi-Wan for listening to his master even when he so clearly wanted to fight. Fantastic! |
Lovingh3art chapter 1 . 12/18/2019 Great story! I liked how you write everyone in the plot. The Jedi dialogue is something kind of foreign to me in terms of writing it, but you did such a phenomenal job. Not to mention the duel was exciting and I loved seeing Obi as a Padawan face down Krell, with a hint or two as to his future in the war. |
Evelris chapter 1 . 11/10/2017 Aww, that's great! Epic fights and wisedom lessons! |
Loves to read books chapter 1 . 5/25/2015 I feel sorry for Krell. He is the only one of his kind to be a Jedi (that we know of in this story) and the council always sends him on long lonely missions due to the fact that they can not control him. Sad Great story though |
Brievel chapter 1 . 4/13/2015 Well done. *bow* |
ASWF chapter 1 . 1/19/2015 wow, Krell's second message was very gracious :) he is Jedi too, after all. Obi-Wan is fantastic. A victory against Krell a scant two months after winning the Seva tournament :D i love your Obi-Wan so much! and i don't know how you do it - you show that he is brilliant, but without having him come across as overpowered. Qui-Gon is amazing here too. Both humorous and insightful. Your Qui-Gon far outstrips the one in canon, it'll be like comparing a *junior* Padawan's lightsaber skills to Krell's. Love this one to pieces; thanks for sharing! :) |
MJLupin27 chapter 1 . 9/3/2014 Jajaja OMG I absolutely loved this! I love to see brilliant Obi-Wan and ever since I saw the Clone Wars chaps I wanted to see Obi-Wan and Master Krell duel.. I loved Dexter's intervention :D thanks for writing this, I had been looking for something of the like :D |
Padawan Aneiki R'hyvar chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 :D Ohhh, I like this one too. YAY, Obi! hehehehe Although I'm sure Ben To Li wasn't all that happy with him. ;) lol |
Eruhin chapter 1 . 11/18/2013 Very entertaining story, I enjoyed it :) It's a good thing to have someone like Dex on your side, Obi-Wan's final triumph over his own desires and over Master Krell was (almost) all thanks to Dex's dinner and wise advice ;) |
Shadow Chaser chapter 1 . 7/13/2013 Obi-Wan you are such a perfect Jedi. I love you. P.S. - Kick ass man! Kick ass! |
Nanuk chapter 1 . 6/24/2013 Sometimes I think you should have been a Master, too :) Precious! |
peacelight24 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012 This story reminds me of when my mom told me I couldn't quit piano lessons until I didn't want to quit. Good job, the fight scene was well done. |
Obiwan456 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012 Brilliant. I love the way you write - I read in awe of your writing skills. The way you put words together - man. Anyway, loved this story. Loved Obi-Wan determination to obey his master even when Garen was urging him to disobey, and when others were pressing him. Fighting without the "wanting" to fight helped Obi-Wan keep his head during the fight. He wasn't so eager to "prove" himself against that huge Jedi (as apparently the others were) but instead used his head and out smarted him, then in the end won as much by his wits as by his skill. Probably what the Besalisk was looking for. Although it's too bad he re-hurt his knee in the process...he'll have one unhappy healer to face on that one. Brilliant piece of work. How do you do it, Ruth? ;) |
Jeune Circe chapter 1 . 5/17/2012 WOOOOOW! So wow! I'm dying! What a fight! Such a funny story! And so sweet at the end! WOOOOOOW! I'm still in the middle of the battle! Watching the sabers and Obi Wan's incredible dance! Hell! That jedi was scary! Too huge, too fast, too much! Plus la personalité! Wooow! Hahaha Obi Wan always makes me laugh :D Obi Wan frowned slightly. "It was either the Force's guidance, or Dex's abominable cooking. I might never be sure." The Jedi master met this impertinence with a stern expression... Hahahaha perfect ending, perfect beginning, perfect batle, perfect Obi Wan! Perfect fanfic, perfect author! Don't let Palps said otherwise, Darth Ruthless :D TC! |
julzdagger88 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012 ANOTHER great story! I don't know how you come up with all these ideas but there always so much fun to read! I really like how you got Dex involved! You should totally do a follow up with Knight Krell! He and Obi-wan have such different chemistry - not to mention the different characters of Krell and Qui-Gon! Very good read! Thanks! |