| Reviews for Make It or Break It |
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   Lili1478 chapter 10 . 6/21 Great story! I loved it! Sucks that it is abandoned tho. ;-; |
| Kittyhell chapter 10 . 3/27 This is amazing! ! |
| yukixyuri13 chapter 10 . 2/6 I hope you continue this. Its really great |
| BaddieDZ2 chapter 10 . 1/8 You improved a lot over the course of this. I'd take back what I said, but you still lied and abandoned this story. What a shame. |
| BaddieDZ2 chapter 2 . 1/8 This is awful, no wonder you abandoned it. Jesus Christ, did you even reread this before you posted it? Don't answer, since I know that you couldn't have. |
| KathyBk chapter 10 . 12/6/2019 This is amazing, I can't wait for more. Good luck with the rest of the story! Looking forward to reading more chapters... |
| Leo chapter 10 . 7/7/2019 You know every so often I come back to this story and re-read it from the beginning. I can't remember how many years it's been since I first found this story but to this day it is still my absolute favourite. I still hope that it will one day be finished but if it isn't, thank you anyway for creating it _ |
| laelruin chapter 9 . 6/27/2019 I seriously would like to read more. This story is so interesting with so much unexplored possibility! It's loads of fun to read with great characterization. I'd love to see Kakashi's reaction if/when he realizes exactly who Harry is. LOL L |
| TheOneJester chapter 10 . 5/8/2019 Sooo much looove! I really like this story! Tried to read slower and slower so it wouldn’t end. Well I do hope that someday you might update! I know it’s hard sometimes. Anyway thank you so much for taking the time to write and share this story! 3 |
| RyderPhenex chapter 10 . 3/30/2019 So he finally became a bitc*h of konoha huh.. Good good... Nice story with shitt*y theories |
| GalaxInfinity chapter 10 . 3/5/2019 Was not supposed to have healed a ninja in the first chapter, an ANBU? |
| Spidersauce chapter 9 . 1/28/2019 Honestly I'd have liked to see him refuse flat out, say he'd go to Amegakure or something. He shouldn't stay near Jiraiya imo. |
| Spidersauce chapter 7 . 1/28/2019 I don't really like that you have Harry so unwilling to kill. It seems a bit out of character I suppose |
| Spidersauce chapter 2 . 1/27/2019 This . . . this is PAINFULLY stupid of Harry. I don't think I've ever seen Harry so stupid in a story.I mean . . . really? What the fuck did you think tackling was going to do you pathetic worm . . . Glad he at least thought of attempting to defend himself and stumbled on possible mind magic. But come on . . . |
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/8/2019 please come back and continue... |
