Aww, cute! There isn't enough ArMor fluff, and you wrote it so wonderfully. Great job!

Excellent first kiss! And I liked the dancing. Their interaction was very in-character, too. I often wondered while watching the first season if the writers planned to have Arthur and Morgana be a couple at some point; them seemed well suited at that point.

Great! But you do relize that Morgana and Aurthor are half siblings, Unless you made this before the third season where it reveals that Morgana is king Uthers actual daughter then this is alittle creepy

This was wonderful, I always wanted to see a scene like this. A sequel or second chapter would be great.

So beautiful and sweet! Please, write a sequel, I think we all would love to read it! )

A beautiful piece of writing. Don't know why Merlin writers couldn't think of this! Anyways keep up the good writing .. :)

supersweet!

I loved it, truely amazing.. I would highly recommend another chapter , please keep going, you will have alot of reviews in no time. Thanks for the chapter :)

Beautiful. just beautiful. I love every moment of this story. Who cares if Morgana/Arthur are partly related. in many countries they can get married. anyway, thank you so much for a good story on my fav couple.

Great story :) I loved every bit of it. If only it had happened on the show !

Wow! I loved this! Every single bit of it. I could picture the entire thing vividly in my mind as I was Reading. I also really grapsed the strong emotion that was there between the two of them. I also enjoyed the uncertainty of it all, that they looked at each other as brother and sister and then they suddenly realised that there might be some feeling there. The kiss was beautiful too, and it was really sweet. I loved how you still kept the playful humor between Arthur and Morgana but how they were able to put that aside and be serious when need be. You really kept in character, I could have really seen this happening! Before BBC screwed it up... Your writing style was utterly so pleasant to read.

I hope you update this with a chapter two, there's so much you could do with it, maybe their feelings could have some complications? I'm not sure but there's plenty of ideas you could play around with. Well done! I loved every second of it, you have a real flair for writing.