This was pretty good, though where is the second chpt.? You wrote this November 2, 2011! It's October 7, 2012! Did you like forget about this story? Forget about FanFiction?! Well let me tell you that if someone clicks this story they are expecting a good story that is more developed than this! This is F-ing pathetic! You need to update very soon or you won't be getting many more happy comments...good day, Kelsea.
-Nico

nice

Okay, Seriously? You need to update... Like... Really. this is... so freakin Aweosme!

plz UD soon ive been waiting for ages. i dont mean to sound whiny :)

Please update more! I'm in love with this story! I'm gonna sit in the corner and rock myself until you update! PLEASE! HURRY! WRITE WRITE WRITE!33333

keep writing :) this is great cant wait to see what happens next

Tehe, I love it already. Can't wait for the next chapter, man, your stories are awesome!

when r u going to update

it's reaaaaly good

i cnt wait 4 the nxt chap.

I think this story is going to be really awesome :D i cant wait for them to read some fanfics :P Im wondering whose theyll read...

please i want more

continue good Elavan fanfic

I really want to read this story! I also am reading The Road Ahead. Hope you update soon!3xoxo

Good Chapter & More Please

I like where the story is going and that you call us dolls hehe. I personly think Ari wants to get to Avan instead of Vic too :) there is prove but well what can we do about it :(

Love your story UPDATE ASAP.(oh forgot to say please)...PLEASE!

YAY ELAVAN! D love it! continue and ud soon plzz!