It's spelled merde, dear 3

Aw, this was really good I can't resist me some PruCan or mythical creatures and this was a wonderful combination of the two

The one thing I would have to mention is that all the line breaks were a bit awkward at times. I mean, I understand the need for them, but perhaps you could have found a better way to transition?

Still, I love the story, and it was very cute

ALCIDE! XD

It made me so happy when I saw his name. I loved your story, though it would've been better as a multi-chapter. The lemon was HOT!

This was great! I loved how you made it part of some fantasy world; I don't see that often! But... Forgive me for asking... Do you usually read/write yaoi? You just... Didn't seem familiar with the hetero/female side of the lemon... :D You're good, though! You have excellent grammar and spelling~ Please reply~

Very nice :) Just a note though...it's spelt Merde, I don't think Marde is a word.