Really nice! It's well written even though I didn't expect Rachel to give in at the end... It seemed a bit forced, but I really liked the story :)

lmao

mel

So funny, I just loved it !

this is good

I liked this story until the end. It was well written, but I was surprised that she just gave in when she had just said she wanted to wait. He did end up pressuring her. That being said, I liked your writing style, so I'll be on the lookout for more of your stories.

Wonderful lol

lol...cute :)