Reviews for Dawn of a New World
Guest chapter 32 . 3/7
Please come back! It's been so long. I really like this story. It's 2020 already. I miss it! I want to know what happens next?!
Guest chapter 32 . 3/7
When are you coming back and update this story. I hope you upload something soon, part of me is fearful you might've abandon this story. :(
Guest chapter 32 . 10/23/2019
Wasn't friezas first form 530'000? Did you changed it on purpose or by mistake?
Great fanfic by the way :) Definetly one of best examples of "that really could happen in said story"
a forgotten place chapter 6 . 7/7/2019
and niggas act like it's skill
a forgotten place chapter 5 . 7/7/2019
All humans do is copy each other
a forgotten place chapter 4 . 7/7/2019
It's the same old f8cking sh9t
a forgotten place chapter 3 . 7/7/2019
Niggas who play high tiers just want easy wins
a forgotten place chapter 2 . 7/7/2019
People pick high tier characters in fighting games because they just want easy wins and don't want to work hard and learn how the game works
a forgotten place chapter 1 . 7/7/2019
Scrub
Legendary-AI chapter 6 . 8/24/2018
I just found this fic I hoping you continue to update since your last update was in march
Spades231 chapter 32 . 5/2/2018
So glad to see you still working on this.
Abcd chapter 17 . 3/11/2018
A little plot holes
You said Yamcha and company brought a couple senzus, just in case
Then why didn't they simply give one to Goku and brought him along with them too? I mean that was kinda stupid and I think you accidentally overlooked that little info
Sexy chapter 1 . 3/9/2018
Yes
super mystic gohan chapter 32 . 3/11/2018
nice little chapter everyone did well can't wait to see more really should be interesting
ShadowLDrago chapter 32 . 3/9/2018
So Frieza has a thing for numbers, can't blame him.

So that open hand explosion happens technique actually got a name in Xenoverse 2, Sonic Bomb. It's, not the strongest, but it's fun to use and decently easy to hit with.

Ah good, Vegeta knows the downside of Oozaru, it's not easy to wrap your tail around yourself in that form and even if you could, Frieza would be so small comparatively that Vegeta would likely never be able to hit him.

Ah, using one of Abridged Vegeta's lines against him and to a near exact same effect. PERFECT.

Yamcha has a pressure point technique, nice. Sadly, against someone like Frieza, it won't do much.

Krillin did it, he used the Solar Flare Kienzan combo, and Frieza showed why it wouldn't work, upon hearing an attack called out, or even the buzzing of the technique, they're gonna dodge immediately.

Fun fact, the "I can win, I feel great" thing, that was in the ORIGINAL DUB. TFS didn't add that. They just lampshaded it. And that just makes it funnier.

Also, Nail and Kami staying in Piccolo's head is one of the greatest things TFS did with the characters.

Also, Piccolo growling irritably is half his dialogue.

And Krillin's been impaled.

Yeah, the whole Namek saga was, it was a whole thing for Frieza, probably the worst time of his life.

Yeah, with how fast DBZ characters move, even a fraction of a second can cost you dearly.

Krillin and Yamcha are healed, hm, either Senzus or Dende.

Speaking of Senzus, why don't they ever summon Shenron and ask for a bag with endless Senzus? Or give one to Bulma to analyse? Or hell, ask for a Piccolo level healing factor if not better. Or flat out IMMORTALITY. Considering the things they end up having to deal with, that sounds like it would be very useful. Or the ability to seal away someone's power or SOMETHING. They have access, to a MAGICAL WISH GRANTING DRAGON, who can bring back an entire planet's worth of humans, an entire actual planet, grant immortality, eternal youth, potentially to rule the world, you'd think they'd take advantage of this sort of thing. Or that they get stronger every time they get hurt like Saiyans. Seriously, magical wish granting dragon, USE IT.
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