Really great story!

Great story! Loved your potrayal of the characters. Very well done.

"...and the cost might be Edward" Cheap at twice the price I say!
Leah hit the nail right on the Head Its more like brainwashing when it comes to Bell because it certainly aint love.

This is one of the best Jacob & Bella stories I've read! I almost stopped reading when Jacob imprinted but just couldn't stop. Boy, I am glad I continued till the end! I liked the way this turned out. It's about time Jacob got the girl! Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!

How sad that the book Bella preferred cold, dead things. Perhaps that desire for a sense of family was a lot of it even though she had all the family she could ever wish for in Jake and the pack. He wanted Bella to be herself, never wanted her to change to feel equal or beautiful. His love was unconditional and she wouldnt see that. Bella was afraid..of everything. Afraid of change, afraid of the risk that life presented. People could leave, die, grow old. Takes courage to live life on its own terms and Bella was a coward. The selfishness of that mindset is a sickness. Still How she would want to pass up ...life for that same twisted existence with a . Never changing, never knowing life is beyond ugly.
Anyway I like that this story puts Jake and Bella together in a believable fashion and doesnt have Jake as a choice by default because Bella cant have the deadward. THose storys are all like Bella will pine away for the sparkles forever and never be whole but she might as well be with Jake...because he is there. Those fics all read the same and are different twists on the same silly plot. Yours worked out in a natural and very warm, very believable fashion. BRAVO

I've just recently found this story, and I haven't taken the time to review any of the chapter so far. They have all been amazing though. I am loving every minute of the craziness they are all fighting through. This chapter is the lucky one to get the first response because it made me smile. Jacob holding that wrench, and letting the feeling of home soak in, made me relax, take a deep breath, and smile. I LOVED it :) I may not post again until I have read to the end, but know I am truly enjoying your story. Great Job & Thanks for sharing!

interesting story

Wow! They are soo Damn hot together...

I am so glad you wrote this story, I so love it!

Aaaawwww, finally...

I just love Jake and Bella together, they are so adorable...love this story, so much.

Awww

This says a great story. I thoughly enjoyed it

I'm sorry to see this great story end! Thank you!

Thanks for telling us about the nomination! This is a favorite story of mine, from beginning to end and around the tears and stress of how you could possible wrap it all up. It's wonderful, congratulations on the nomination. Going to find that website now!