Please updat! I’m dying to know what happens. Beautiful characterization by the way.

This is my first time reviewing and I couldn't be more excited because I was very engrossed in this story. The plot is intriguing, the characters feel in-character. I love your portrayal of Roy and Riza as soldiers, politicians, lovers. I'm sad to see that it's unfinished (especially since this chapter ends with the promise of Ed returning to the picture!) It's been years but I do hope you continue!

This is so good, it's sad to see it unfinished. But nonetheless, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your story with us!

The writing style was mostly flawless. Good pacing and perfect (on point!) characterization. The plot was very good, and I really am hoping that someday, this would get finished.

I was also really fascinated of the politics here. Very accurate with what's happening in real-life politics.

I can't help it, this chapter was so good! It really showed the dynamics of what Roy & Riza's relationship - finishing each other's sentence, knowing what the other is thinking by just looking, etc. I mean, it is just so real and in character.

I had to review this chapter too because it has got to be the most on character Royai proposal I've ever read!

I was planning to review on the last chapter, but damn, I can't help it! This chapter was really heartfelt. I really liked the relationship between Mustang's unit. You did a good job portraying it. Almost fits the canon material too.

This is such a fun plot, plus I like the characters and relationship of Roy and Riza too.

I'm in love with this story and your writing. Fantastic!

This is an excellent story with a far-reaching plot that I so wish you would continue. It's an interesting future you've laid out for Roy and Riza, and it's so thoroughly done. I hope to see more!

Wow, what an opening chapter! Roy's reaction was perfect, but I can't wait for this happy ending you've promised!

I know you're not working on this one, but I thought I'd follow regardless (on the off-chance...). I think you've captured much of what I wished from this concept and it makes me very happy. It's one thing to have an idea. It's another altogether to pull it off. I truly appreciate the sense of humour this piece has. So often people go off the deep end into nonsensical and slapstick. The best humour is that which lies buried in snide comments and witty comebacks.

Wow! Well, I know you haven't updated this is almost a year but I would live it if you continued! I love this story

Anyway, thanks for writing this! It's great

Absolutely love this story. The writing is smooth and delivered in a pleasing way, not to mention intriguing. Seriously one of my favorite fics that I've read.
The story line is plausible and the characters are true to what I would imagine them to be in this situation.
You are really doing this story justice!
I'm sad to see that you aren't currently working on this story, but maybe my loving review will help?
I'm a bit of a masochist for reading "in progress" or "discontinued" stories, but jeez, you're a great writer and I've read all your other stuff: I had to read this one!

Wow love the story! Please continue

That's just as amusing and fluffy but funny and romantic proposal as Ed's "I'll give you half of my life" alchemy-otaku proposal! I always swoon at creative proposals. And I'll be damned if I did't die of fluff-overload at the Queen piece more than I would ever with a ring!

A Mustang proposal! I love how you worked this out!