You're doing very well, the grammar and spelling is almost perfect and the characters are on point with how they are in the books. Please update

Hey good start keep writing.

Don't Make him Play, I'll review, I'll Review!
See no need for Fan- scratch that there is a need for Fang. Anyways this is good and getting better so Hurry and Update PLEASE. Angel can use Bambi eyes...

Hi this is the first time I'm reading this and I love it! I don't know if your reading this but if you are I was wondering if your are going to continue this story?

Good story i just started reading and i love it. Please continue i love it and it is a really good concept. Tell Fang to not play the harmonica i can't stand it.

Love your series!:3

THIS IS AWESOME (don't hurt my nose!)

reviewing... no more threats please

Please update soon. This story is actually pretty decent compared to others. Please.

-AJB

loved the chapter. Great story btw. Can't wait to see what happens with ari. Piece of advice, it would be a great cliffhanger if you brought back Alexandria. That's it, PEACE.

Ahhhhhh please update soon! :) I need to know what happens

YAAAAAAAAAAY! Finally, an update! I absolutely loooooooooooooooooooove this story! And btw, Ari is a jerk-face-poop-head!

:) Please update as soon as possible~

Yeah, sorry but you're never gonna have views equal to reviews/: just a part of FF

Good story

hehehe cliffy. and i highly doubt fang can play the harmonica... which would make it even more annoying...

UPDATE!