Aww! Loved it.

You're probably right bout the chopsticks thing but this was just so cute! I was smiling like a goof the whole time! .

You had me tearing up with the Caesar story, now you got me melting with this one.

I liked your story, and I will admit it was pretty funny, the concept was pretty spot-on.

The only thing that was kind of off in here was your word choice, things like 'sheen' which is traditionally used as an adjective, not a noun.

But hey, that's just me!

Anyways, great story, but with a little tweaking and fixing and refining, it could be an amazing one!